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Open Poetry #6

The day you went away

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-04-14 06:50 PM

My heart is empty,
I can't give,
Without you,my love,
I can't give,
you anything,
Since you had to leave me behind,
I turn the light off at night,
I feel so lonely,
I want to kiss you,
But I realise that
you're here
beside me,
I want to shout
you belong to me,
you've gone,
So far ,so far, dear,
I can't hold you anymore,
I want to know
you really are the one for me,
Inside,
Deep in my heart
is sad , so sad,
Want to realise you're stilll with me,
But Iam so helpless ,so helpless,
You're not here,

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2000-04-14 06:52 PM

so sad.....I am here if you need to talk about it

Jeffrey

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-04-14 08:04 PM

Your pain is oozing from your words..you've really put yourself in this poem! I hope the a pain eases soon.........

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-04-14 08:12 PM

Vandana,
Great job. You have obviously been burned and way bad. I am sorry that you feel this way, but writing about it is a great way to deal with that. I can feel your pain coming at me from the page....wow. That takes talent. Hang in there!!

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

4 posted 2000-04-14 08:44 PM

Nicely done Vandana... I hope he returns shortly. Well written.

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