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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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For my Angel....... As I lay there, head on the pillow I thought of you often And as the darkness swept over me I saw your face and smiled *************************************************** And I'd give up forever to touch you 'Cause I know that you feel me somehow You're the closest to heaven that I'll ever be And I don't want to go home right now IRIS - the Goo Goo Dolls *************************************************** Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
This poem was short to the point and touching --- I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Teresa King |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
netswan...Thankyou, I'm glad you enjoyed. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely, EagleOne ....... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Short and sweet  |
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Friday New Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 8Vaasa, Finland |
I'm completely obsessed with angels... and I loved this poem... Especially since it didn't really take long to read. You read it... and felt it. Wonderful!!!! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Pepper, Hoot, and Friday I thank you for reading and for your comments. There is much behind these few words and I doubt there is enough space here to provide details. By your comments I think you all understand the feeling and that is what this is about. Thankyou all once again. To my Angel......I know you have read this . There is no need to reply. I know and understand. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is lovely and touching! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Thanks Martie! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle, This is exquisite as your work always is, short and sweet, but in the few words you wrote there was a magnitude of feeling and emotion behind it....what a wonderful heart you have and to share it is an awesome gift...thank you so much for sharing your words and your heart...a beautiful sight to behold. **Angel wing hugs to guide you through your night with your angel in the stars** Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Butterfly, Once again you leave me searching for words. This was something I just had to share and I know you understand. Thankyou for the all too kind comments. Angels, Stars, Eagles, mmmm...something is missing I think. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Just doing a test here!! [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 06-03-2001).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Just testing again! [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 06-03-2001).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
.........and again!! [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 06-03-2001).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
It's still beautiful.... |
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