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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I gently lose my own strength- Tolerance does not become me… Indecisive negligence, in who I am- Brings me to my knees, A Fallen Woman… Time stands, I let everyone fall- Resistance to say no, begging withdraw… Can I not cooperate- Must I always hesitate? My life- Forever a debate… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I can relate to this Well written Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
emotional poem D, i relate to these feelings...insecurities and doubts--they test out hearts dont they... but your not fallen...just human...(smile) take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I too can very much so relate..such emotions do indeed tear at one's heart. Exellent work. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you, thank you for this m'sis! and how i so understand...love to you? nay, love YOU! SO HONEST. lovely. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Throw caution to the wind.....leap and shout to high heaven. It feels great!!! devina, thanks for responding to my poems. much appreciated. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, ah the questions of what one should do..... well just close your eyes and fall, he will catch you...... **Note** don't do this alone unless you are near a hospital. Parker |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think most people can relate to this. Some decisions are harder than others. Great poem! Denise |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
ahhhh....my mistress devina, clarity comes from comedy and comedy from error. When in doubt, plunge forward. It works for me. Rob |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
well done. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Devina, all I can say is, follow your heart. . and you'll make the right decision. . . and if you fall, your friends will be there to catch you. . . Wonderful poem my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ With a heart as open and honest as yours ... you will reap the harvest of gaining much though the fall. Take a deep breath ... and plunge ! You have a safety net ... it's your faith. It will not let you down. Love you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sometimes we spend so much time with the "wrong One" when someone new comes along we are always afraid of the unknown. But we can't allow are fear to rule our world. Let yourself go.... Marina |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Jeffrey- thank you dear, glad to see you reading here!! Janet- As human as they come!!  thank you!!Alwye- I know you understand, guess we all go through it huh?  serenity- Lots a love back atcha sis...I know you'll always be around...MUCH LOVE!!! Danny- I'll have to try that!! Seems you're knowin more than me lately!! James- Nice to see you again dear! Who will catch me...me thinks I'd fall on my head about now!!! Thanks for the thought though!! Denise- desisions SUCK m'friend..lol Rob- I shall try your theory out...I'll letcha know!! Effigy-thank you... Sven- Friends like you, dear Sven- warm this heart a thousand times over...I know you'll always be there...and I'll never be able to thank you enough! Marge- alot of my faith has come from you...know how much I love you dear!!! Marina- yah, I'm letting go...and plunging into oblivion me thinks...lol Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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