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Fishing Tale |
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Fisherman Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 46 |
I went fishing for some bass, Slipped and fell upon my grass Carp ate my bait instead, Perched atop a catfish head' ed out beyond my reach, So I swore, son of a beach was muddy, flailed about, As I floundered, lost my trout- line now I'm poleless, it's too late, Without my pole, can't cast or bait. And the sad fact is I wrote this on porpoise. [This message has been edited by Fisherman (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
LOL Fisherman...You are going to fit in this place very well Welcome to our family Jeffrey |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL LOL Fisherman - well done. I had a whale of a time reading your ditty. Teresa King www.tipsfortop.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh yuh i likes yur style phishfood welcome to passions!! All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
How can I be depressed as long as you guys keep writing poems like this. Thanks Fisherman... "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
HEHE great poem and super first post ,i was hooked from the beginning. welcome to Passions |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is...this is...well I'm not quite sure how to describe it--but me does LOVE it...me certainly does...Most Welcome to the Forum! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You know what??? I really love this... It's nice to have someone around to go out and catch dinner.... This old fisherman really isn't "Old Jim"... He just can't spell.... or is he under a spell???... He suits you to a "T" though...   [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL...well, welcome to passions  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful!! ROFL  Welcome to Passions!Denise |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
ROFL - Now that's funny. I like to fish once in awhile but I never bait the hook - that way the fish don't bother me... michael |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great fishing tale, this is....I have a few myself, that's what makes fishing so fun. Welcome!! |
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Miss Behavin' Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 84 |
I dunno, Nan... He's got an awfully lot of hair there...  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL....ok..you bait the hook and I'll drown the worm....cute poem....welcome !!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
ROFL .... Welcome to Passions !!!!! Love your sense of humor and this delightful piece .... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Fisherman, Well this was cute, very cute indeed. Welcome to passions Cerenity |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A belated Welcome to Passions! |
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