Open Poetry #6 |
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Images in the Sand |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA ![]() |
Darkness falls on the beach As slowly but surely you reach The spot you had chosen that day To look up at the stars and stay. In the dark, the ocean breeze Calms your soul, your troubles ease And sand around you still feels warm From many hours of sun's brutal scorn. You cannot see, in the grayish sand The transient markings in the land Made by those who had gone by When blue sea also made up the sky. In the sand drawn pictures of Different things, some made with love, Some created out of the blue And many of them made by you. And even as the darkness sets, You make pictures; they're your steps As you walk by pacific seas And graced by gentle ocean breeze. Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Sam! Another lovely visit to the beach!! Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So lovely! I've really got to see the ocean some day... ![]() *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was beautiful! Makes me want to take a walk along the sandy shore! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Spyro- This is lovely. I love a walk on the ocean's porch when the stars are twinkling high. Oh, the stories the sand could tell of lovers who've walked the beaches and left their heartprints on the sand. Thanks for a lovely rendering. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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dash rendor Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 21 |
wonderful. Just how i remember the sea from my childhood. You sure can give me visions and help me recall my dear memories. thanx |
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silvershaddow Junior Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 19 |
A great poem. Thanks for reminding me of the pleasures of the beach. |
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