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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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~ Forbidden Drink ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thick green meadows lay below with weeping willow trees Crisp new air blew soft around me, barefoot in the breeze... Lush foliage blooming everywhere I wandered in too deep Your fragrance there, upon the air pure chivalry so sweet... I heard your whisper through the trees a voice so nigh of haunting Yet calling to me - beckoning my spirit trembled, daunting... I stopped, and as I looked about the leaves swirled 'round my feet They danced as if to beckon me my gaze & yours to meet... Your laughter pure, came echoing 'twas then I saw your smile And those eyes so pale of crystal blue this search for you worthwhile... You brushed your hair so soft, aside you took my breath away The sunlight shimmering on your skin - a dream here in midday... You stepped out from the willows as you took me by the hand But still you had not spoken - this I could not understand... You led me through a thicket which revealed a hidden gate A secret entry nestled there - this finding - our's by fate. Once inside, I stood in awe - at what mine eyes did see, An exquisite little garden blooming feverishly for me... A carpet of rose petals stretched as far as eye could see - With daffodils and hollyhocks - you turned & reached for me... With honeysuckle kisses velvet lips crushed down on mine - Your mouth was sweet like morning dew intoxicating wine... You stole my breath, my heart was faint you held me in your arms Your mouth, it drank so deep of me - transfixed by your charms... You drank of me - and drank of me I lay a wilted flower There upon your bed of roses overcome by all your power... You lay beside me tenderly a tear rolled down your face - Like lovers e'er forbidden there we died in sweet embrace... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *Drink of me* -poetFemmeFatale April 13, 2000 |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
It was because I was a vampire, and a very good wine you were just like this little poem. That's what I like to hear from a woman "Drink of Me", who am I to argue. Parker |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Poet Femme This is touching - as only two lovers can be -- very well written. Teresa King |
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rojogrande Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 29Fullerton, CA, USA |
Lovely poem. Great imagery. Loved the intimacy, as though I could here him breathing along side you. Your sweat and his mixing, becoming one, as you two were, with one sweet embrace. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
For lack of a better word....Erotic ....oh so  Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Holy cow...somebody hose off Jeff LOL Gen , this is exquisite... so beautiful, and so well written. its like walking the path along with you... very pretty poem... but I'll leave now...cause 3's a crowd... unless of course your into that scene... err forget I said that LOLJ/K...I'll just hide over here in the bushes and take notes... I bet I run into a few people I know LOL later, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Everyone should visit this place....and not alone! It was beautiful! Kathleen |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
pFF~ ROMANTIC,ROMANTIC,ROMANTIC!  this is lovely!-SEA |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Jeff's pants are on FIRE hot dang - get a hose! What's under them pants, Heck, who really knows? Could be spotted boxers or a black satin thong -  Oh geesh, Janet fainted - - Jeff, put some clothes on!!!  (fanning Janet with his thong....er...a.fan!) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I've never made woopie in a rose garden ... fell in a rose bush once though ... got a honkin big thorn up my keester ... and a gentle reminder every time I sat for the next week Rex}>{{{{o> |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Uh....Rex? Did you say you have a honkin big keester? May I ask - what IS a keester? ROFLMAO  Okay, so I read/see what I want to read/see. So shoot me! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
With what shall I shoot you ? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Um, pFF? Have you been looking into my notebook again? This is really good!! Nice to know that you haven't lost that romantic touch. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
pFF...satin breaks me out...my thongs are made of silk.....lol Girl you are funny Jeffrey |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
"woha... look at all the colors maaan.." =) I really liked this poem and I think the colors made it for me... but hey! My eyes are BROWN!!! Get it straight girl! J/K Lovin' it! "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Somebody's been bitten me thinks. My Gawd you can write beautifully when the mood strikes you. Excellent poem, Gen. Michael |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
ewwwww...like the goth in you sis. Now...where's my toothbrush? |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
How mesmerizing these words are. Fantastic poem. Rich |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~sitting in silence in admiration of your wonderful writing talent~~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This really isn't a vampire tale ! I promise! He didn't drink of her blood like Parker said -  He truly kissed her deeply on the mouth, thus drinking of her, in that way. When they kissed passionately, they both died, for it was a forbidden love...although, they took the chance for just one kiss. (batting eyes...) No blood drinking in MY romance stories! hehehe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtaking, Gen! Very beautiful! Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I just want to say how humbled I am at all your rave reviews! I'm really not worthy. This poem was really hard for me to write...I stumbled around with it for over 2 hours. It's a very intimate piece for me to share, as it was written about someone in my past, who I don't even talk to anymore...alas, he inspires me to write of "love" that just couldn't be. No matter how far he wanders, to me, he is a dear friend. I've not been "bitten", nor have I forgotten what color your fabulous eyes are, WhiteNite...(how could I?)....*sigh*.....Just wanted to write something a little magical, and find some closure to the tale...Thank you, as it too, is one of my own most favorite pieces. Love you guys!! You're all so dear to me! -poetFemme |
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