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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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CHARMED Silent, in darkness, all alone. What lied within, not to be shown. I built my shell, complete and whole, That none outside would see my soul. The pain of lifelong disregard, A cocoon of emotion grown hard. You dared to touch me, dared to shine The light of your life unto mine. A wealth of warmth, love in a smile, You made me see life worth the while. Broke down the wall of bitter pride, Somehow found beauty deep inside. A sun, now, shining over me, Adjusted eyes can finally see... Through all your thoughtfulness and caring, Life, indeed, is meant for sharing. So as toward my dreams I ascend, I'll ever give you thanks, my friend. Because of you my heart now sings, Free to fly on butterfly wings. Michael Anderson  [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Absolute perfection! There was always goodness and beauty within Michael. Sometimes through our pain and tragedies we hide it though. I'm glad it's come to the surface again!  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! Just beautiful!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Fly away my friend and happy flights |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Micheal, You are a poetic GOD!!! Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Silent, in darkness, all alone. What lied within, not to be shown. I built my shell, complete and whole, That none outside would see my soul. The pain of lifelong disregard, A cocoon of emotion grown hard. You dared to touch me, dared to shine The light of your life unto mine. ---------------- A sun, now, shining over me, Adjusted eyes can finally see... Through all your thoughtfulness and caring, Life, indeed, is meant for sharing. So as toward my dreams I ascend, I'll ever give you thanks, my friend. Because of you my heart now sings, Free to fly on butterfly wings. ----------------- ~Wings To Fly~ Butterflies are meant to be free, as are the hearts of poets... like you...like me. You were always beautiful... there in your quiet cocoon. Your light ... always there... equal to the sun and moon. Tired eyes have to adjust to the light... it takes time to come out from the silence of night. Angels of love ... gave you butterfly wings, and like a dove, your heart now sings. Seeing you like this... makes our hearts glow. We love seeing you charmed...dont ya know.  This poem makes us all smile, you've now charmed us... with your poetic style. I've always known inside of me... you were a butterfly -- just waiting to be free. Love gives us all our wings to fly... take flight now our dear friend... hearts soaring towards heaven and sky. jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
My My Michael, When I was reading your poem you were right on top of passions flower but when I returned you had fallen down from the bower. By time I found you, you were heading down for the count, so I thought I should give you a little bounce. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Beauty in words |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Michael, your soul soars beautifully with color and clarity of light...go forth and continue to share your goodness all the day. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
*tears* Thank you very much for this, my friend...and thank you for being you. This is gorgeous, Michael. There has always been beauty inside of you, you just needed to set it free. Fly now, m'friend...and fly high. [This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Rebecca, I smiled today for the first time in I don't know how long... Indeed, it sure felt good. Sunshine, you have everything to do with the "sun shining over me" here. You friendship has been wonderful for me of late. I can't thank you enough. Jeffrey - did you know GOD spelled backwards is dog? I think I'm more comfortable with that analogy... Thanks my friend, you give me too much honor. Janet, as always, your words are taken to heart. TY Lucky, thanks for the bump...LOL Satiate, you have been a true best friend to me. Thank you for always helping me to maintain focus while allowing me to be true to my emotion and above all, for ALWAYS being there. Thank you everyone for the kind replies. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing Michael....James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Michael--this is SO incredibly sweet--no sugar in my coffee this morn'...a very lovely read as the sun rose in my window.... Thank you. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Well written Michael -- I enjoyed reading it - obviously straight from the heart. This forum appears to be addictive. Teresa King |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So good to hear you have a smile with you now, Michael ..... This is a beautiful tribute to our wonderful Sun .... She brightens my life, daily .... A beautiful and uplifting piece ... Hugs "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is simply beautiful, Michael! Lovely! Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very beautiful poem Michael...( I liked your addition too Janet!) So glad to see you flying - I know she'll love this! Fabulous pic too, really adds to it... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Knowing that you might smile awhile, Michael, is all that we ask. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
No Micheal I meant exactly what I said I don't think there is one person in this entire forum who wouldn't give their right arm to be able to write with such vision, such exquisite detail. Just to be able to express our inner most feelings the way you do. Words can not describe the absolute beauty of your writing. You are on a level playing field with any poet in history ( just my opinion) but I'm sure most will agree Jeffrey |
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Stormy Weather New Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 3Wilmington, CA, USA |
This was so beautiful. There are no words to describe how beautifly perfect I thought this was. |
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Cassanova Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 39Turlock, Ca. |
A perfect match Michael! The poetry though, surpasses the beauty of the picture! You, are amazing!! Jason |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm smiling here, Michael, for you, with you.. and this marvelous poem....ROCKS! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
When you smile, I smile - my dear friend..  |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is gorgeous, my friend. Light and lovely...it's nice to know that there are a few special people in life that one can rely on. Beautiful words. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Jeffery is right Michael, your stuff is awe inspiring. I keep running out of superlatives trying to respond to your poems, because anything less would be an insult to your skill. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This was a bloom in a vase that belongs in the sunshine in front of my window. There.....it's there in a vase, and it's not as beautiful as this poem, but I think I see a butterfly longing to rest upon it. Kathleen |
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