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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-04-11 08:49 PM


              The Concert

A woodland concert plies the air,
Of micro to macro lending.
Each moment sends a different fare,
A multitude of blending.

It is a work that stirs the heart,
A symphony of the hour.
Come hold my hand and play a part,
And love within its bower.


© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 2000-04-11 09:24 PM


Nicely done.  Enjoyed the poem.
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2000-04-11 09:34 PM


Beautiful, Sy
Very compatable with my spirit
Love ya'
Liz

RainbowGirl
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3 posted 2000-04-11 10:09 PM


Sy: At just gone 3am this will play nicely in my thoughts as I go off to dreamland..

HUGS

 If I could, I would and if I didn't, I should have!

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2000-04-11 10:11 PM


Mike, Thank you for the read and comment.

Elizabeth, A spitit that we all should heed.
Love you
Sy

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-04-11 10:14 PM


Very beautiful.  I like it!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2000-04-11 11:03 PM


RainbowGirl, Happy dreams. *L*

Lone Wolf, Thanks for the read and comment.

hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2000-04-12 09:24 AM


Ah...you never fail me Seymore  
Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-04-12 09:50 AM


Sy's pen strikes the ear again...well done...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Janet Marie
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9 posted 2000-04-12 09:53 AM


music to my eyes, Sy...
love seeing your poeticly serious side as well...when ever it pokes its inspired head out *S*
very melodic and perfect
take care, jm

Denise
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10 posted 2000-04-12 11:21 AM


Thanks for sharing the music with us, Sy! Very beautiful!

Denise

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2000-04-12 01:45 PM


Hoot, And I hope it never will. *L*

Sunshine, Thank you sweet. *L*

Janet, It's always a pleasure to read your comments.

Denise, You are more then welcome. *L*

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