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rojogrande
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since 2000-04-10
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0 posted 2000-04-11 03:03 PM


Little bright cat eyes
Shining in the dark of night
Seeing more than we


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Miss Abagail Mannering
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1 posted 2000-04-11 03:33 PM


short,and to the point...i never could write haiku's

 "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!"

Temptress
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2 posted 2000-04-11 03:44 PM


Beautiful Haiku. Adorable subject.   Are you a cat lover too?  

INclan
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3 posted 2000-04-11 06:56 PM


rojogrande,

Welcome to Passions.  I prefer Haiku. Yours is very well done.  I look forward to reading more of your work.

INclan

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-04-12 01:10 AM


Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome.... I like your Haiku!  
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5 posted 2000-04-12 02:05 AM


Rojo~ Welcome!   I don't know much about haiku's but I liked this one very much.-SEA
Nan
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6 posted 2000-04-12 07:54 AM


They do see infinitely more than we, don't they??.. nice one..
Cerenity
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7 posted 2000-04-13 11:55 AM


Hi rojogrande,

This is wonderful, and yes they see all of those things that I don't like in the night (bugs, mice,big bad monsters)hehehe

Welcome to passions,

Cerenity

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8 posted 2000-04-20 10:56 AM


Bolt up suddenly~
For unmoving green eyes stare~
Eerie feeling sets...

welcome to passions,rojogrande...a most delightful first post...i am a budding haikuist myself and i can't wait to share/discuss haiku with you ")

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