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The little things
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The little things |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The little things Stop and see the humor of things. Smell the air and perfume it brings. Perhaps a smile, chuckle or two. To cheer your day as laughs may do. Just think upon a sunny day. The birds and bees are all at play. The grass is green the sky is blue. Your girl is pressing close to you. You walk along your mind in song. The drifting scents of flowers strong. When suddenly the scene has quit, You never knew you stepped in it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You got me with the surprise ending again! This is hillarious! Thanks for the laughter!!  Denise |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Just think Sy.....If it wasn't for "little things"....Poor Balladeer wouldn't have a sex life?......nicely done old man.......as usual..... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Grinning, grinning, grinning... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Smiling! In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very funny, I must say! You always do light up my day. Love ya |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Gotcha. *L* Toe, It's always the little things? Sunshine, Is that better then a smile? *L* Martie, Glad to be able to make you smile. *L* Elizabeth, Happy I can do something for you. Love Sy |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Superb Jeffrey |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Oh my...I wasn't expecting that ending  Good One!! Marie~ |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
"The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ You had me going! LOL This is great!  -SEA |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Clever way to put your best foot forward, Sy |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Thanks for the laugh! Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
how many times have I told you-- dont track up my floor!! I bet Ive told you this now... a 1000 times or more. when will you ever learn Sy how do I get thru to you?? take off those damn shoes... when you step in doggie doo. thanks for the smile Sy... love your wit jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You'd best watch your step, Sy...  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, You had me singing a tune and then you through in that last line, so I just took it out of my head and cept on singing. Very wonderful, Cerenity |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Clever clever Seymour his poems are to die for with loverly images and fragrant rhyming then he throws out that zinger ~ what smelly timing! Loved it, Seymour. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, since you asked, my "smile" fills my face, but my "grin" has some devilment behind the eyes....LOL! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful people above, you are my delight. I thought about the mischief of this poem and it made me write the other one. I do hope you enjoyed them both. Sy |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
i never saw that one coming! SO funny! |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
great! what a charmingly funny outlook. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
weaubleau, Well neither did they. Thanks for the read and comment. Effigy, Thank you so much for the comment. |
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