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Whisper to the Wind. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Listen. . . can you hear it? Floating through the air like leaves? A song so wonderful, sweeter than the birds' A song so quiet, that only with a heart of love can it be heard. Can you hear it? Listen. . . can you see it? Filling the sky like the arc of a rainbow? A song so colorful, so much love does it hold A song so rare, rarer still than the ever desired pot of brilliant gold. Can you see it? Listen. . . can you feel it? Caressing your cheek like a wisp of silk? A song so touching, so light and so fine A song so exquisite, for you and you alone to tell you that I'll love you for all time. Can you feel it? So should there come a day That you ever need my love and I am away Go outside and whisper to the wind soft and low I will hear your voice and whisper back, "I know my love. . . I know. . ." ------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I love this - exceptionally tender and meaningful, appealing to all the senses, and memory too - thank you for sharing! ~ ~ ~ P.S. Also, I love the title! ~ ~ ~ [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 04-10-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ This is soooooooo pretty. 'Caressing your cheek like a wisp of silk' 'So should there come a day That you ever need my love and I am away Go outside and whisper to the wind soft and low I will hear your voice and whisper back, "I know my love. . . I know. . .' Truly tenderly done. Lovely, Sven. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
What wonderful new inspirations you must have to write such a beautiful poem. But I heard that in the wind. Marina |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
You are king of the romantics i truly love this poem Jeffrey |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very tender, romantic and well worded Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
poetic winds do blow in this my friend... i hear it and feel it in this... very nice Sven...I think this is my most fav of yours...love it!! take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
How sweet and lovely....  K |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Sven, my twin separated at birth *L*, this is very romantic indeed. I love the layout of the lines also. Very smooth. You the man. *S* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
My my, you are an incurable romantic aren't you |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, This is very touching and romantic. I loved it!!! One of your best I think. Excellent.... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
~sigh~ Simply beauitiful~ ~sigh~ Marie~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh my goodness, I could die! This is wonderful, love it!May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful words of comfort for your heart's true one, indeed the king of romantics. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is pure enchantment Sven...And yes I can feel it..  Keep this up and you're gonna write the full book of love m'friend!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Sven this was just absolutly, positively heart felt. You are a true romantic indeed |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 SHHHHHHHHHHHH........can you hear it??? A million butterfly wings whispering....BRAVO!!Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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