Open Poetry #6 |
Long Gone |
Aria New Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 4Escondido, CA |
Long Gone To where have they gone, The many who might have been wrong, Maybe treated like a pawn, To where have they gone? Where might they go, Where the rivers still flow, And no one will know, Where might they go? How can they survive, Into trouble they have dived, For what can they strive, How can they survive? Never again will I see my friends, Too many times the road bends, What can I do to make amends, Never again will I see my friends? By: ArĂa |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yipe where did they go where did you go..nice flow to that their poem welcome to passions!!! All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passions Aria. You're gonna love it here. Jeffrey |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. I look forward to reading more from you. This poem is so sad and haunting.... |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
good first post... this place is wonderful. i've been here only a short time, but i love it and i'm sure you'll love it too. welcome. |
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Flidais New Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 9Durham, CA |
Very well written. I don't understand it, but it sounded good. Welcome!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Aria~ Welcome to Passion's. Nice entry and you'll enjoy it here. If you've got Cerenity for a friend ... you've got a treasure for sure ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Aria, This made me so happy to see your name and your poem here at passions, you are as much my child as the rest in this house and I am so proud of you. There are no words to discrib how wonderful this place called passions is, but I know you will soon experience it for your self like I did. Welcome to passions and I know I will see more of your work. Love you much, Cerenity |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome To Passions!! This is a great entrance...and yes were do they go....and do they think of you as much as you think of them....Thank you for sharing this with us Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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