Open Poetry #6 |
Opinions in our Pockets |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Opinions in our Pockets ~~~~~ Lets keep opinions in our pockets at the bottom out of sight Wrong conclusions to a problem seldom sheds it any light ~ An altercation row or ruckus when too hasty we decide Perhaps can be avoided once we see the other side ~ As we wander on our journey try to look beyond ourselves Extending all the olive branch instead of who to pelf ~ If we try to lend a helping hand with smile upon our face Our deeds could root throughout the land and save the human race ~ We can find the best solutions ditch the ones we thought we knew Pull together for the better watch what other people do ~ With our friends around our table and our lights all burning bright We will never trip and stumble past the answer in the night ~ Develop wisdom used with caution always stop to look around Try to greet our new Horizon with our feet upon the ground ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Whoa, This has givin me alot to think about. Good job Rex....Im sure the next time I offer any advice I`ll think about this Thank`s for the advice Rex....lol just kiddin YOUR WORDING ON THIS IS GREAT. < !signature--> Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-13-2000).] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I have to tell you... good projections. Life is what we make of it and we all have personal opinions... and I should repent because sometimes mine get in the way. Good Projections, I need that sometimes, Lucky |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Wise words Rex. "Lets keep opinions in our pockets"....I shall remember that. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Hi Rex...I liked this also. Your message here is sound ~ to give advice carefully and only when appropriate. I really like that last stanza! Nicely written, Rex! Claire |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rex Allen, Rex Allen...so that's an opinion in your pocket? And I thought you were just glad to see me! Good Advice from a good friend! Don't mind my little joke, please, I am just feeling a little naughty these days...lol |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou all ... It can really make ones day when such good people say such kind things I quite often find myself giving an opinion when one wasn't asked for I really need to stop doing this even though I always mean well Rex |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex- Words of wisdom here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
thanks Marge |
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silvershaddow Junior Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 19 |
Great words of advice. I must try and remember them. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice, I like this poem very much, it's great, well written and we can all take some advice from it . Lovely . |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Very true and important message. As my sister once said in one of her writings "Why don't we take off our "pettycoats". Made me think of that. The opinions of others perpetuates (or can) such negative feelings. I loved the way you expressed this. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great advice, Rex... well done! |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Probably the thing I most tell myself..."Open mouth, insert foot" I should really listen to this poem you have posted here. Could save me a fortune on shoes and dental work. Anyway, thanths thor da wead. (Foot stuck in mouth) haha. Chris |
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Raul Noriega Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 11 |
Wonderful and inspirational! I loved it! |
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