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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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My touch is slick poison My words – a whispered curse I am hidden, I am hiding I am the poorly written verse I am tired of sharing my heart Tired of losing out to Fate Sick of the games attempted with me Weary of fighting off hate Tear out my heart and its feelings too So that I may live my life in peace I’m tired of the sideline hurt Sweet Apathy - my blissful surcease |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Very cool. Sounds familiar "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
You totally covered my life Jeffrey |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
short, but sweet. good job. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Yawp...nailed this one right on the head....good job, Satiate. Keep writing.  Alicat |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Poem with so much truth, "I am tired of sharing my heart Tired of losing out to Fate Sick of the games attempted with me Weary of fighting off hate" This stanza describes my feelings and thoughts so well. Great job! The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
*sigh* I doubt anything I can say will help. Michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is AWESOME... very beautiful poem, its wisdom and grace kinda blow the first stanza out of the water tho...(smile) loved this poem. take care, jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Much said in this one |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Thank you all for your kind replies, and I'm sorry that so many can relate...Apathy is a wonderful thing, but its eventual whiplash of feeling is a bummer. lol Michael: Not at all...you know me so well that even your silence is comforting. JM: What a sweet thing to say! Ali: Hey guy, thanks for the read. |
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