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Serenade of Song Forgotten
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Serenade of Song Forgotten |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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May silent reading lips be still. May scrolling finger quiver. May the promise of my name fulfill you in your need--delivered. (Would just a whisper from my lips, winking of one eye--blow kiss-- fix all that you have found remiss-- Serenity becoming Bliss?) Eyes at rest upon horizon, hand over heart-- trust begotten? Mere serenade of song forgotten? (You knew that it would be like this.) Electric sparks on fingertips. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
May silent reading lips be still. May scrolling finger quiver. May the promise of my name fulfill you in your need--delivered. -------------- (You knew that it would be like this.) Electric sparks on fingertips. ----------------- ooohhhh baby...may lightening strike twice...thrice... conducting heat again -- my sweet (smile) love ya like this...very nice  jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sounds like someone is very lucky. Truly great piece of poetry Jeffrey |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
beautiful. loved it! i really enjoy all of your poetry... thank you so much. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
serenity, I really enjoyed this. There was humor, pathos, sexiness, thought -- the whole package.  Is this new? Please, ma'am, we'd like some more.Mike |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JM--Oooh Baby! Glad you're keeping up with all of this...(Smart lady, you...) JC?--ahem-er-Jeffrey--very kind of you to say so--hope he agrees...thanx. w/b--thanx to you also--love to ya. Now Mike: Did you say... "humor, pathos, sexiness, thought...?" oh you do wax poetic tonight...absence MUST make the heart grow fonder....lololol... And is this NEW? You KNOW it is the story of me f-ing life...and there's so much more to tell....absolutely love to you--outdone yourself tonight. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, this is so special. Love to see this side of you, serenity. Indeed, serenity becoming bliss! Loved it. Michael |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh me, oh my, oh michael...thank you, so much...love is good, yes? Even when it's but a breeze blowin' through...fire cannot exist without air...smiles as I exit... |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I like this, especially the last two lines! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ *Mom* smiles. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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