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lindak6
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since 2000-04-09
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0 posted 2000-04-09 10:20 AM


If I made you smile,
Hold it close in your heart...
For if you hold it tight,
There, we will never part...
If the wind caresses you gently,
On some warm summer evening...
Here me sing softly...
For there is no sadder sound,
Then the song of goodbye...
3/26/00


[This message has been edited by lindak6 (edited 04-09-2000).]

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2000-04-09 11:36 AM


This is lovely Linda! As I said in my reply to your first poem here, I hope you continue to write...if I can ever be of assistance, please let me know. We are very supportive of each other here, you'll find a strong sense of family. Please take some time to read some of our work, perhaps you will get some more inspiration to write lovely poetry such as this.....  
Aimster
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2 posted 2000-04-09 11:52 AM


-Linda

first off a beautiful name you have! was my mom's and is my sisters name. and you sure do live up to that beautiful name. a very beautiful piece of poetry you have here. this was so awww so touching! it stirred something within side of me. was simple yet so elegant. welcome to passions! take care.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

lindak6
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3 posted 2000-04-09 12:07 PM


Poet...Amy   Thank You!!
It is funny how life spins us in a circle....The tears I spoke of in the first one were written for the one I said goodbye to here....
Linda ~.~

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4 posted 2000-04-09 12:39 PM


Linda~
You made me laugh,
you made me cry
this is a very lovely goodbye.

Your heart is saying some lovely things.
Enjoying very much.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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