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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-04-08 09:50 PM


Love is everywhere

Everytime I look into my baby's eyes
I see the ocean...I see blue skies.
Don't really know how they got in there
but I'm glad she has so much love to share.
Oceans deep and oceans wide
freely flowing with the tide.
So many oceans of love inside
everytime I look into my baby's eyes.
Oh how I love the love she shares
I look around it's everywhere.
A fresh morning dew love flowing through
everytime I look into the blue skies of my baby's eyes.
Her glowing sunshine so warm and bright
always leading to romantic moonlit nights.
I love the love my baby shares
just look around love is everywhere.

Jameslee@April8,2000
forLena
mybaby


[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 04-09-2000).]

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Panthers Chrysalis
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1 posted 2000-04-08 10:17 PM


You have captured the essence of "true love"... in a childs eyes...  

Denise
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2 posted 2000-04-09 12:51 PM


This is beautiful, James! Very lovely!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-04-09 02:47 AM


Beautiful poem james...so sweet

dhuron
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4 posted 2000-04-09 04:40 AM


Wonderful poem!

Full of love, great job*S*

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-04-09 03:36 PM


Thank you Panthers, Denise, Romantic, and dhuron for reading and commenting on my writing.  I appreciate it.   James
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6 posted 2000-04-09 06:31 PM


James, this has such an innocent and sincere feel to it... very "you"!

~ Claire

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7 posted 2000-04-09 06:53 PM


What can I say... makes me want to be a dad. =)< !signature-->

 "We always said it would be good to go away, someday,
but if there's nothing there to make things change,
if it's the same to you I'll just hang."  
--Matchbox20 (Hang)


[This message has been edited by WhiteNite (edited 04-10-2000).]

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2000-04-10 01:15 AM


Thank you Claire I appreciate your kindness.
WhiteNite this baby of which I speak is a real live beautiful woman named Lena..a lady friend that I call my baby.  James

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9 posted 2000-04-10 01:45 AM


true love where are you?
great poem

Jeffrey

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10 posted 2000-04-10 01:49 AM


Oops... sorry James.

But hey... the great thing about poetry and art is what it means to the person reading it right? =)

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)

weaubleau
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11 posted 2000-04-10 02:32 AM


i followed whitenite in the child side of the poem, but after rereading it, i loved the companion side, too.  it's funny how a single poem can have such different meanings!
great job.

pen of passion
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12 posted 2000-04-10 09:11 AM


I agree with weaubleau re meanings for I assumed you were writing about your girlfriend.  Lovely poem.
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13 posted 2000-04-10 01:25 PM


Another beauty James!

Marina

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14 posted 2000-04-10 05:07 PM


This is a beautiful sentiment, she must be special.

TCS

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2000-04-11 07:52 AM


Thank you Jeffrey, WhiteNite, weaubleau, pen of passion, Marina, and Celtic.
I never thought of this poem as it was a father writing about his baby until WhiteNite mentioned it..and when I reread it I was able to see that it could be read that way..but I would have to leave the line out..always leading to romantic moonlit nights.
I believe Lena is very special.  I cannot count the number of women on two hands that when I first met them I had a feeling that they would be someone special in my life...she is one of those...I can only hope my feelings and my hopes become my reality and my life.   James

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16 posted 2000-06-29 05:40 PM


Nicely done!!!!!!!
JamesMichael
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17 posted 2000-07-03 07:37 AM


Thank you Vandana for your nice comment..James
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