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When Evening Shadows Fall
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When Evening Shadows Fall |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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When Evening Shadows Fall ~*Marge Tindal*~ When shadows of the night caress the sun goodbye then and only then will I let down and cry For in the light of day I see your memory clear but in the solitude of night I've no one to hold me near No one to whisper night-nothings in my ear telling me that they love me without your precious self here Not one moment of deep sleep shall close lids of sorrows eye washed away with loves tear at our very last goodbye Just a moment of joy clings to my longing heart in the bright light of the day but in evening it quickly departs That you loved me in the meadow awash with sunlight that day is enough for me to retreat to the coming light of day When the morning breaks I shall hope again that I've got what it takes to face the evening shadows from within ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Marge...this makes me want to cry--A beautiful poem, even if it is sad. Hugs!! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
How sad this poem is~ You've crafted it beautifully, Marge~ Marie~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, Marge, when you write from the heart, there's no one better....... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Oh, don't cry sweetie. I'm glad you liked the sentimentality in it. Mariee~ Thank you for a sweet reply. Balladeer~ I always know I've done it right when you see my 'heart' in it. Thank you, my sweet friend.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Painfully beautiful, Marge! I too know this feeling. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"In the solitude of night I have no one to hold me near." Marge we all go thru this at sometime in our lives...I don't want to but I must. James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ At some time I'm sure we've all felt the 'shadows' .... thanks for the reply. James~ Written from a spirit that felt the call of the hearts of others. Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Nice poem, Marge... ! Isn't it amazing, how we can be so brave to face the day- and nighttime falls, and we feel the emptiness even more!? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ This was soo sad, I could see the heartbreak in it and feel the depth of the despair once the sun went down and night appeared. Beautiful piece. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sad, Marge. And so beautiful too! Denise |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is hauntingly beautiful and poignant, Marge. Exceptional. I can relate to it so well. Thank you for sharing it! |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Very beautiful poem! I enjoyed it very much. I look forward to much more of your poetry! "It is in our aloneness that we recognize our oneness, even as the single droplet of water knows also that it is the sea."Daniel *Cassie Roseen* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
What a beautiful poem!!!!! I enjoyed reading it |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When the morning breaks I shall hope again that I've got what it takes to face the evening shadows from within ------------------- perfection of your pen and heart margie-girl look for me in the shadows...we'll toast the eve's arrival together...  take care, jm |
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Ladyhawk Junior Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 18Brownsville, TN -USA- |
Wonderful Poem from the heart! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you so much my friend. Rosemary~ Sometimes sorrow knows our name and then the happiness returns on the dawning of the new day. DawnEclipse~ I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. My heart has much more to share. VanDana~ I enjoyed knowing that you read it. JanetMarie~ Thank you so much for the invitation. I'll meet you in the light of the shadows. LadyHawk~ Thank you, my friend. I visited your web page and it is very promising. I will return to share the spirited visions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marge, I have never heard any piece that came closer to the feeling of facing the night alone. Very well done. Thank you for sharing. Jeffrey |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Marge, such a beautiful poem! It touched me very deeply. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, last year my uncle died. I went to Arizona for the funeral. The had been married in 1942. My aunt said time and time again that the days are okay, she keeps busy with her friends. But at night, the quiet, the emptiness is inescapable. The spot on the bed where he laid next to her all those years, vacant and cold. Made me think long and hard about love like that. So many rewards, but so much loss. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing this with us. Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Panther~ Sorry, missed you in there ... Thank you .. you're right. Tracie~ Whoops ! ... missed my gal. Thank you for being there. Jeffrey~ Glad that you found it so touching. LoveBug~ Sweetie, I'm pleased that it touched you. Corinne~ Yes, the loss is so hard when it's remembered in the still of the night. Thank you for sharing that story with me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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