Open Poetry #6 |
Our Gentle Sea |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
In a dream I floated with you in a journey all our own, beneath coverlets of loving where no thorn has ever grown. ~ ~ ~ ‘Twas a boat of gentle rocking on our nighttime’s calming sea; and I was warm within your arms as waves lapped tenderly. ~ ~ ~ No tomorrow lay before us, and no yonder shadow cast; as our world became our shelter, and we were alone at last. ~ ~ ~ The winds were soft and quiet, and the silver moon was bright o'er that dream in which we floated through a long and fragrant night. [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, so sweet and tender this is Rosemary. I think that you and Lucky were on the same boat rocking night dream. You write of love with love. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ You literally ROCK ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Music to mine ears as float upon yon sea. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful and very loving Liz |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hay Honey, Did you by any chance remember to lock the door..? This is sounding like it could be a long voyage. Be a good girlscout and catch it for me and I ) be a good boyscout and get prepaired. |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Reminds me of a dream I once had... on a raft, so peaceful.... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Changing in a swirling, tension—filled, beautiful, exciting way. Still changing, it’s like looking through a prism. Nothing is ever the same twice. I like watching God do His stuff. It started with some mystique Canadian cruise we’d been longing for for quite some time. Maybe I was just an observing tourist. Nobodi seems to know exactly where my thoughts were. My old friend who's come with me tells me, “it seems to start nowhere in particular.” However my emotions are pressing, crowding one another. Then suddenly, just off the twilight cruise and hitting the expressways, my Petula Clark downtown heart skies are hung in dazzling architectural jewels. God can sure make your shine happen. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
absolutely splendid piece of work.it flows right off the page into your mind making sweeet beautiful music Jeffrey |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
i think thats the most romantic thing i`ve ever read...i wish i`d written it hehe Fantastic work Rosemary |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such a beautiful voyage, Rosemary...a beautifully fluid and loving verse! ~ Claire |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rosemary~ this was very gentle indeed! Very soft. Very nice. -SEA |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Martie - You sweetie. Yes, he and I do often take the same boat... Marge - Cute! Glad you could feel the motion. Mike - I appreciate your catching my feelings. Elizabeth - Yes, the love is what it's truly all about. Thank you for seeing that. lucky - you're entirely right - it's a voyage of great beauty, my love, and we will never have to near the shore. Panthers - thank you! lucky - You bring back our sixties, seventies, eighties, nineties and now - all in a single comment! Such a sweetheart! Jeffrey Carter - thank you for hearing the music! I appreciate that so much! NamelessOne - I am very honored at your appreciation! I don't think I've ever had a comment such as yours before. Thank you so much. Meadowmuse - I enjoyed the way you described the verse as flowing - going right along with the tide of the feeling! SEA - thank you for feeling the gentleness. In the long run, with all the beauties considered, I think the gentleness of loving means the most. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
RoseMary, this just takes my breath away!......I love it - it is so soothing, almost lulling. Aaahhh... What a beautiful picuture you painted in my mind of two lover's in their boat, making the most of the waves! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Thank you Femme! I appreciate that you can feel the love in this one. |
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