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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-04-08 04:00 PM


Off the Shore

Well come as I was
in courage by a fiend to be gone this
journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold
get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there
yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft
and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you
into a piece full come for table ground but if you no
thing like me you be tried of the same mold
contempt or airy voids that sneaks to
glory fly woke gather then tall
ants which draft tick
ally skewers art and graces
such in dived level souls with the
drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any
be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own
lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams
thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé
in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart
con trash to ease kind of odor ease
very same will not rest pond
to a poets rule of dumb
which pears to be just act
ally what they lethal ridge ally
cordon wit newt protest or sin sure
as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of
finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough
will fat make it add mire able odor
I weight for the voids to rule
ball looming nocturne
ally true in neat..?
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[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).]

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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
1 posted 2000-04-08 04:05 PM


lucky, I wish I had a water bed like yours...this was magical
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
2 posted 2000-04-08 06:27 PM


You have such a magnificently powerful gift with words!  I would stay off the shore forever with you, my love!


poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
3 posted 2000-04-11 11:30 AM


Ay...I love poetry on sailing...Your words, as always, paint that lulling picture so serene in my mind!     Fabulous memories here, I especially liked the playing of the guitar in the moonlight....Bravo sir!  
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-04-11 11:54 AM


Sail? this one glides  
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
5 posted 2000-04-11 01:19 PM


"in the still empty moonlight"
Great imagery.....been there and loved it.
Nice writing.

lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
6 posted 2000-04-12 12:25 PM


Passions

Thank You all once again.

Marge, we do take time outs on the real water you know... Did that come out right..?

Joyce, you leave me no choise. If you say so then... I'm such a magnificent... but I keep forgetting. Thanx for the re: minder.

Femme, so glad to see your still poking your nose in while doing a little sailing of your own.

And

hoot_owl, I been thinking about a little gliding 'fore I get to glued to this machine. Glad you liked.

Danny, Guess I don't have to tell you... but one things for sure we'll be doing it again.


 

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