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Balladeer's Secret Life
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Balladeer's Secret Life |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I saw a man was lurking, In the corner of a shop. They were not selling watches, Or tackle or a mop. Their specialty was delicates, A lady just might wear. Some things were quite naughty, And bold beyond compare. He tried to peek in change rooms, When the door became ajar. One lady smiled right at him, Closed the door and slid the bar. He scanned the store, began to drool, At the pleasures on display. He had to make a purchase, Take it home to make his day. He waited home most patiently, For the moment to arrive. Opened up the little bag, For passion he did strive. He looked upon the fabric, Felt it's touch upon his skin. He felt a glow begin to grow, From some where deep within. He had to know, he had to see, The combo he had bought. He looked in to the mirror, In bra and panties he was HOT! |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
LOL, that was a very funny piece! I enjoyed it immensely.  "It is in our aloneness that we recognize our oneness, even as the single droplet of water knows also that it is the sea."Daniel *Cassie Roseen* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sweet Marilyn told her true love She had a negligee So hot to make his eyes bulge out And really make his day. So, while he waited, she went in And took off all her clothes Then came back out with nothing on Except a pair of hose. "Here's my new outfit", she exclaimed. Her eyes quite brightly twinkled. "What do you think?", she smiled. He said "It's nice but why so wrinkled?"  |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
LOL!!!!! What an image this evokes! Great job Marilyn! And Balladeer, shame on you, making fun of such a wonderful lady! I think someone should punish you!  Oh Toe, where are you?  *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
LOL this is hilarious Marilyn, excellent work indeed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WAY too FUNNY i think BOTH of you need a good spanking... i also think BOTH of you would enjoy it!! THANKS for the good hard laugh... very creative Marilyn...you too bad boy B. take care , jm |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
ROFL! Marilyn that is too funny! Balladeer, how could you! Saying that about Sweet Marilyn? I agree with JM, Marilyn should give you a good spanking! You two are great!  Abrahm Simons "...Watching fate as it flows down the path we have chose" - Trent Reznor, "We're in this Together" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marilyn~ LOL ! This was a great spoof ! It was a spoof ... wasn't it ? (what color were they ?) *Balladeer~ LOL ! Uh - oh ! You're in for it now ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
LOL....this is a great poem, Marilyn!! I totally enjoyed it! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
All I can say is, "You two deserve each other!" |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
What a picture you paint, Marilyn!  LOLOL Excellent ..... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Thankyou all for your kind replies. I knew everyone would get a kick out of this piece. Balladeer: I moved toward my willing mate, Fire in my eyes. I ran my hands once over, The hose upon my thighs. I smiled at him and in reply, To the words that he had spoke. "The hose are stretched and wrinkled, Did you wear them as a joke?" He turned six shades of crimson, And I knew there in a flash. He had a little fetish, He hated things that clash. I found he had been chumming, With a man I thought was dear. He learned this little fetish, From a man called Balladeer. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LOL and more thanks for the laugh this morning Marilyn...this was great and well done of course. |
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Justin Tolerable Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
And they say I'm Intolerable...lol. |
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