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Destiny Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 47 |
Exchange of words is only the beginning of the trade. I confess that I am frightened by the connection the we've made. My life exposed to you, I search for a place to hide. More so then I intended my heart is open wide. Daily fighting demons, battling for my soul, struggling with the throng of thieves, who keep me less than whole. Can I give you what you ask for? Can you give me what I need? Will I give in to my longing or the cautions will I heed? Is the fear inside me greater than the driving force I feel? Can the tears begin to cleanse the wounds and prompt my soul to heal? You make me want to trust again, my heart for you for you to know and yet I hold back, daring not to love, to share, to grow. I beg of you, be gentle as we venture through this part, I'm drawing on my final hope to share with you my heart. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a wonderful poem, Destiny. I could feel the fear and hope in this piece! Very well written! Denise |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Destiny this was breatakingly beautiful! this is the first piece by you i've read and i quite enjoyed it. the fear of trust could be heard in every line of this...i wish you lots of luck in this new love! take care! AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Destiny, This was beautiful! I hope you find what you are looking for!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Destiny, new feelings can always be quite fearful. . . I hope that you find what you're looking for Excellent poem, my friend, I like it ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
I completely understand what you are feeling. You put it so very well Beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Destiny~ This is quite a lovely piece. Interwoven hope and doubt. Cast the doubts aside ... go for it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Destiny this is PERFECT!!! a very beautiful poem. the rhyme flow is smooth and the expressions of your emotions are perfect. hope, doubt, love, ... a poets best sources for inspiration. very nice job take care, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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Destiny Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 47 |
Denise, tulip, and sven, marge and one who... im so glad you like it, and thank you for the encouragement... that means so much to me.. Amy, very nice to meet you janet... perfect is probably an overstatement, but thank you nonetheless (and btw... i adore vertical horizon too)Destiny |
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