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Hurt and Consequence |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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Every day there's a new bruise to cover I thought you were my soulmate, my savior, my lover Seduce me then screw me over seems to be your goal Your words of disgust have been taking thier toll You make me hate everything, you make me hate me There's no one as messed up as you make me out to be You somehow think that I never loved you Though I've stayed through all of the things that you do So up yours, I love you and could care less what you say Maybe you could love me again, maybe someday "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
painfilled poem SM, but very well expressed emotions... healing and strength always comes to us from our writing. You should post some of your poems over in Dark Passions(if your not already. take care, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Well written, ShadowsMystress. Stand tall in yourself. INclan |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
"Everyday there's a new bruise to cover" Ouch .... I hope this isn't a true life experience that you are living, SorrowsMystress ... I did live this .. and finally found the courage to get out .... I now love and respect myself and found someone who I love and truly loves me ... instead of bruises; I now have flowers .... Very well expressed .....< !signature--> "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars." _Les Brown_ [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Sorrows Even though this was painfully sad, still beautifully written. you write from a soul that has experienced a lot of emotions. this i can tell from your work. i hope you keep as jan says "writing it out...working it out". writing truly is (at least for me) a way of healing and learning. take care! AMY  P.S. I agree...if you're aren't already you should post some in Dark Passions. ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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