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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Sometimes Sometimes it's not enough.... a cloudless sky on a moonlit night awaiting the arrival of a flawless sunrise. Sometimes it isn't enough a springtime shower on a desert bloom parched from the heat of a prolonged drought. Sometimes it is not enough to say I'm sorry for a deed undone as an afterthought becomes the guilt of omission. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
About time someone said this ... and say it you did ... excellent ... I hope this gets well read throughout the internet Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Another thoughtful piece, Robert. I like the way you described your "sometimes" in this poem, with the last line landing soundly at the reader's feet. I enjoyed this! Claire |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
You have a style I like very much, excellent poem here. I just visited your website and I like what I saw there also. Thanks for sharing with us. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You've made me re-think some issues that are currently playing out in my life. That is what the art of poetry is for, I believe. And you, sir, are an artist. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB- You are truly genius with your thought process. What a perceptive look at a deed undone. I enjoy your writing very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent thoughts, Robert. Sometimes we try to make up for too much with too little and it's just not enough.....or something like that. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks all of you...this poem came from a life experience where I did not act when I should have. I looked the other way when I should have been paying attention. Robert |
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