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weaubleau
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since 2000-04-06
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0 posted 2000-04-06 02:24 AM



take my hand…
hold it…
let me know you care…
you can reach my heart…
with just a single touch…
please, just take my hand…

take my heart…
keep it…
it is yours already…
shape it with your love…
fill it with your happiness…
please, take my heart…

take me…
love me…
let me hold your hand…
let me open your heart…
let me make you smile…
please, take me…

take my love…
it’s the truest you’ll ever know…
i will never love another…
you’ll never need another…
i’ll be yours forever…
if you’ll only take my hand…


© Copyright 2000 steven - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2000-04-06 02:33 AM


This is a beautiful and warm hearted message.   Welcome.
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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2 posted 2000-04-06 06:25 AM


Lovely sentiments...welcome to our family! Please check your email for a special greeting.  
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
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3 posted 2000-04-07 11:08 AM


Hi Weaubleau,

This is beautiful, and it truly comes from your heart well done friend.
Welcome to passions

Cerenity

Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-07 01:30 PM


This is so beautiful! Very lovely!

Denise

weaubleau
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5 posted 2000-04-07 01:44 PM


thank you all for your replies...

any suggestions?

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