Open Poetry #6 |
The Face of Love |
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
The Face of Love I have seen the face of Love I’ve stared into the crystal depths of Its gaze And found myself Love stared back at me ~Unwavering ~ until I turned away and ran and ran and ran straight into Its arms where I was made new again I have seen the face of Love It looks a lot like you |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sounds like a woman in love. Beautiful! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh I love this....this gives hope to those of us who are still running .....great structure, great poem |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful Tara!! Well, we had the Eyes of Love and the Face of Love. . . anybody want to do the Voice of Love? --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully done, nice poetry. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tara- This is the first piece of yours I have read. I was impressed! This was excellent both in presentation and also in feeling. you have a wonderful way with words. keep writing, and i look forward to reading more. amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Danny, it shows, does it? Corazon, there is always hope out there. I've found that I generally run into the very things I'm trying to run FROM. Sven, that's your challenge! The Voice of Love. Mike, thank you for reading and replying. Amy, I've got more stashed around Passions in various places, but this is the first that I've written in several months. Thank you. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful writing, Tara. Wonderful to see you again |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara~ And when you surface ... it's a delight. I really enjoyed your presentation in this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Balladeer, it's nice to know I've been missed! Marge, a delight? I'm blushing! Thank you. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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