Open Poetry #6 |
Crazy |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Crazy Banished roadways of dual priorities Dancing the mile it took to envision Gloss red spiked shoes alive kicking Stones fashioning themselves solo Give me a bottle of fine coffee liqueur No drinking and driving never friend Cast a fishing line but don't reel it in Know the man watches from the pier Salt in your eyes glazes them in tears Crocodile's breath enough to succumb Bless the darkness as it plays in time Give the music man an ear for a minute he'll shine your shoes change an image Ghost of past has not finished reaping Grab the doily hush not a single word Wrap the phone cord around your finger Say I'm not that crazy three times fast No not three times fast, I'm not that crazy You can't possibly multiply fast and crazy but anyone at all can become crazy fast |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Wow...Another one flies over the cuckoo's nest! Glad of the company, m'friend! But truly, this is great! Enjoyed it much! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Whew!! I got dizzy on this one, dreamer! Love the style and the thoughts. Phones have cords????? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PatsyCline~ I liked this. Or I think I liked it. If I did like it, then I liked it a lot. C R A Z Y ... I'm C R A Z Y ... over Y O U ! And someone just told me that I liked this poem too. Whew ! I thought I did. But if I did ... why didn't I know I did ? Is it contagious ? ~*Maniacal Marge*~ (I think) Oh .. I THINK .. therefore I AM ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL @ all them nuts. LD twists and turns of life, must be careful I'll get lost. Good one my dear |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
serenity: Thank You very much, glad you enjoyed. Balladeer: Thank You most kindly,I think I got dizzy too, or something to write a poem so crazy, and yes some phone cords still exist a few at least...LOL Marge...LOL Thanks for reading and enjoying. Rebecca: Thank You, I must have taken a wrong turn somewhere myself...LOL |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey..I've been crazy for a long time |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Whew! This one made me a little dizzy (a little more than I usually am!!) Bad day, Gloria?!! hehehe.....interesting poem! Denise |
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