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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-04-03 10:32 PM


Crazy

Banished roadways of dual priorities
Dancing the mile it took to envision
Gloss red spiked shoes alive kicking
Stones fashioning themselves solo
Give me a bottle of fine coffee liqueur
No drinking and driving never friend
Cast a fishing line but don't reel it in
Know the man watches from the pier
Salt in your eyes glazes them in tears
Crocodile's breath enough to succumb
Bless the darkness as it plays in time
Give the music man an ear for a minute
he'll shine your shoes change an image
Ghost of past has not finished reaping
Grab the doily hush not a single word
Wrap the phone cord around your finger
Say I'm not that crazy three times fast
No not three times fast, I'm not that crazy
You can't possibly multiply fast and crazy
but anyone at all can become crazy fast



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-04-03 10:48 PM


Oh Wow...Another one flies over the cuckoo's nest!   Glad of the company, m'friend!  But truly, this is great!  Enjoyed it much!
Balladeer
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2 posted 2000-04-03 10:48 PM


Whew!! I got dizzy on this one, dreamer! Love the style and the thoughts. Phones have cords?????
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3 posted 2000-04-03 11:19 PM


PatsyCline~
I liked this.
Or I think I liked it.
If I did like it,
then I liked it a lot.
C R A Z Y ... I'm  C R A Z Y ... over Y O U !
And someone just told me
that I liked this poem too.
Whew !  I thought I did.
But if I did ...
why didn't I know I did ?

Is it contagious ?
~*Maniacal Marge*~
(I think)
Oh .. I THINK ..
therefore I AM !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-04-03 11:44 PM


LOL @ all them nuts. LD twists and turns of life, must be careful I'll get lost.
Good one my dear  

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
5 posted 2000-04-04 05:42 AM


serenity: Thank You very much, glad you enjoyed.  

Balladeer: Thank You most kindly,I think I got dizzy too, or something to write a poem so crazy, and yes some phone cords still exist a few at least...LOL

Marge...LOL Thanks for reading and enjoying.  

Rebecca: Thank You, I must have taken a wrong turn somewhere myself...LOL

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 2000-04-04 10:44 AM


Hey..I've been crazy for a long time  
Denise
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7 posted 2000-04-04 11:06 PM


Whew! This one made me a little dizzy (a little more than I usually am!!) Bad day, Gloria?!! hehehe.....interesting poem!

Denise

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