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Heaven Sends For You
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Heaven Sends For You |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
By cherubic graces we are fated Held together by common interests Winged angels measure, our hearts weighted, We somehow find ourselves a place to rest Love shall be willed upon us now, it’s true For all of Heaven smiles with sweetness pure And rapture wrapped in bliss for all you do Your fragile nature itself half the lure Cold comfort in today, not in sorrow, For when you ascend, my heart will go stiff Watching them take you where I cannot go Useless is my longing for only ‘if’ With this broken arrow I cling unto, Waiting helpless, as Heaven sends for you |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. |
Wonderful....simply wonderful. This is the kind of poem I've been looking for to express how I've been feeling this last week about someone very close to me. Thank you for sharing it and allowing me to read and get the expression out. I loved it...Bravo |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lurvely poem. A powerful expression. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Held together by common interests Winged angels measure, our hearts weighted, We somehow find ourselves a place to rest Love shall be willed upon us now, it’s true -------------------- Your fragile nature itself half the lure Cold comfort in today, not in sorrow, For when you ascend, my heart will go stiff Watching them take you where I cannot go Useless is my longing for only ‘if’ ------------------- *sigh* you know I LOVE this one...its perfect...one of my most favs, for sure...as are all the new ones...and old ones and... well, you know *S* this is graceful and perfect.Beauty in words. stalking you in Heaven  your jm From Heavens light to your heart...inspiration found, By our emotions of rhyme and verse, we are sweetly bound. These words sublime in your wisdom, your grace -- so true... I am touched by an angel, when touched by you. jm < !signature--> ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-03-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
powerful words...your feelings touch deeply  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely..I loved it. James |
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gemini shadow Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 70the mystic |
this is SO beautiful, you show such tenderness and warmth in your words... I know the person who inspires these emotions in you must be very touched by this. She must feel very lucky. I know I would. peace gemini I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes I want to be the touch you need every single night I want to be your fantasy And be your reality And everything between I want you to need me, like I need you. celine dion |
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Billy Bolden Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 23 |
JML, "This broken arrow I cling".. has been my hope for many years. Well done, nothing lost in the cryptic. bb |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Denise |
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