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Spring Air |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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SPRING AIR The air in spring does so entice Like blends of aromatic spice It would suffice to say that mice And birds live free in paradise The scents of spring do so refresh The lilac air and perfumed flesh They mesh in all of April’s fresh And breathe new life in every breath I smell the swell of fresh and new The nice of spice on morning dew I sense the scents of lilac too But twice as nice, the scents of you Elizabeth Santos |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
I love the imagery in this..very beauttiful poem..great writing indeed. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I think you just invented smellivision! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Elizabeth! Spring is in the air!! Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, great poem, Liz. I love the ending. Sweet and romantic. Michael |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It is officially spring...so many lovely spring poems! This is wonderful Elizabeth..  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
What an enticing poem. Very nicely done. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Truly beautiful, Elizabeth...you do such nice things with imagery. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent as always Elizabeth. . . The smell of love in the air. . . *Deep breath*. . . ahhhhhhhhhhh!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A little gem. Beautifly done. Love Sy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Makes perfect scents to me, Liz  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Love it |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've just made me pause and inhale deeply... another lovely one, Elizabeth! *S* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Liz This was so great!! You have a wonderful way with words and possess a gift of being able to give line after line of powerful imagery! Loved this!! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I would like to thank you all for your very kind responses. I didn't like this poem after I posted it, and so I was hoping it would drift away, but it kept coming back. But I'm glad some of you liked it. And I thank you for your comments. Much appreciated Liz PS And my children and I loved the smellivision remark [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 04-05-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You are such an inspiration to me, the library is closed today, but not this one Kathleen--(Kay) |
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