Open Poetry #6 |
After Losing Our Litle Girl (For Lucky) |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
We laugh together; an easy laughter of tender devotion and care. Delicately weaving and embroidering; securing the splinters of our hearts lovingly back together. A light aria of music quenching the desolate air; ~ ~ ~ Our laughter, colorful and rich, flits like a hummingbird across the hollow chasms of pained browns and grays; cuts like a laser beam through the darkness suspended ‘round us like thick blinding haze. ~ ~ ~ We laugh together; for our tears often tremble too close to the surface. So fragile it feels; but we know our loving laughter heals. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ Great big hugs to you. I so enjoy your work. (and what are you feeding Lucky these days? His work has been awesome) Big smiles in this corner of the world at reading your beautiful work. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The beauty of your words rips at my heartstrings Liz |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
A touching poem...wonderful writing. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
A beautiful poem that rings true, somethings people don't realize that laughter too can be a part of grieving. A healing salve that brings the grievers closer together. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary, you weave magic in my heart with your poetry...it touches that place that understands. Wonderful and touching poem! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully done. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Loving laughter does heal, but hopefully, sharing will help the healing as well. Beautifully written. Healing hands of caring souls are reaching out to you. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Dearest Ducky Oh how I know your heart... it's true the two have become one and no longer twine. All the loss, all the death, all the harry-carry of the living. 38yrs. in Sept. and I can still see the same spark. Of course it's a lot warmer now. LOL Dale & Rosemary Forever XXXOOO |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Your words are very gripping! |
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