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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
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northern mountains, Idaho

0 posted 2000-04-03 03:12 AM


We laugh together;
an easy laughter of tender devotion and care.
Delicately weaving and embroidering; securing the
splinters of our hearts lovingly back together.
A light aria of music quenching the desolate air;
~ ~ ~
Our laughter,
colorful and rich, flits like a hummingbird
across the hollow chasms of pained browns and grays;
cuts like a laser beam through the darkness
suspended ‘round us like thick blinding haze.
~ ~ ~
We laugh together;
for our tears often tremble
too close to the surface. So fragile it feels;
but we know our loving
laughter heals.



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-04-03 07:41 AM


Rosemary~
Great big hugs to you.
I so enjoy your work.
(and what are you feeding Lucky
these days?  His work has been awesome)
Big smiles in this corner of the world
at reading your beautiful work.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
2 posted 2000-04-03 10:32 AM


The beauty of your words rips at my heartstrings
Liz

CherylLynnMckee
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3 posted 2000-04-03 11:49 AM


A touching poem...wonderful writing.

 

Songbird
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Missouri
4 posted 2000-04-03 11:53 AM


A beautiful poem that rings true, somethings people don't realize that laughter too can be a part of grieving. A healing salve that brings the grievers closer together.
Martie
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5 posted 2000-04-03 03:09 PM


Rosemary, you weave magic in my heart with your poetry...it touches that place that understands.  Wonderful and touching poem!
Mike
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6 posted 2000-04-03 06:05 PM


Wonderfully done.
Danny Holloway
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Tulsa, OK
7 posted 2000-04-03 06:42 PM


Loving laughter does heal, but hopefully, sharing will help the healing as well.
Beautifully written.
Healing hands of caring souls are reaching out to you.  

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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Idaho
8 posted 2000-04-03 09:09 PM


Dearest Ducky

Oh how I know your heart... it's true the two have become one and no longer twine. All the loss, all the death, all the harry-carry of the living. 38yrs. in Sept. and I can still see the same spark. Of course it's a lot warmer now. LOL Dale & Rosemary Forever XXXOOO


 

WhtDove
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Illinois
9 posted 2000-04-03 11:21 PM


Your words are very gripping!
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