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Maybe It's Love
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Maybe It's Love |
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peaches_iu New Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 2 |
How can I write this What can I say To help you understand What I feel everyday. When I'm around you Looking into your eyes I feel like I'm in heaven And I ask myself why. Because of your arms Strongly holding me near Because of your voice So soothing to hear Because of your brilliance Your deep eyes Your soft hair I want you to know I will always be there. Because of your kindness Your warm gentle ways Because of your smile putting me in a daze. The way that you act Your style Your charm Your heart being one thing I'd never try to harm. I've tried to explain how i feel in this peom I just wish I was with you And not here alone. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is really beautiful, Peaches! I think you have expressed it very well!! Denise |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Nice job, Peaches! Very well-written and expressed. Hope to read more of your stuff! Troy  Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome, Peaches! It was very well expressed. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice and smooth..yes maybe it is love and maybe its a friendship but it sound lovely. James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!  ; |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I think it's love. Your feelings are written on the page, and very nicely Liz |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
peaches, this poem speaks volums about your heart. It is so wonderful to read. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
VERY LOVELY POEM!! I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH!! IT EXPRESSES WHAT YOU FEEL VERY WELL!! ~~~LOVE~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Peaches~ I think perhaps you're right ... Sounds like love to me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Billy Bolden Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 23 |
Just peachy, I feel the same way about someone. Very nice work. BB |
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