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Just The Mention Of Your Name
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Just The Mention Of Your Name |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Just The Mention Of Your Name ~*Marge Tindal*~ Just the mention of your name ignites the embers once again Leaping into raging flame at just the mention of your name Cold the smolder of the past Passion's fire that did not last Ashen now the burned remains at just the mention of your name From within there comes a doubt that this fire has not burned out You return and I'm not the same with just the mention of your name Hotter still the passion grows Burning me with ecstasy's glow I've no one but myself to blame for falling in love all over again at just the mention of your name ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Isn't it amazing what a simple thing as the mention of a name can do to us? Well said, Marge! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Marge I really liked this piece quite a bit. The mention of someones names can stir up so many emotions within. this was very well expressed by you here. i enjoy reading your work, and think you are a very gifted poet. bye for now. take care, amy  p.s. once again, thanks for your suggestions on my work. S M I L E ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Lovely poem..and I agree with Aimster your a very gifted poet. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, Marge this is excellent! I am in a place right now where the exact same thing is happening to me. Thanks for sharing this piece! It's true just by a little reminder or by the mention of his name, it can rekindle old feelings and bring buried memories to life once again. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Yes, it is amazing. Thank you for liking. Amy~ I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. I appreciate your comments. Anytime I can help ... give me an e-mail. CherylLynn~ Oh, thank you so much, hon. Denise~ You know that I'm glad you enjoyed it. Melissa~ Well now, I knew my muse brought it to me for someone's spirit ... thank you for letting me know it was yours. (and I'm serious about that) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I never felt that way about someone ( except my favorite singer) but' I'm glad that you do Marge. Lovely poem! Nathan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge, I stand in awe of your tremendous talent with words. This is very moving. I liked it a ton. Yes, just hearing a name can do amazing things and conjure up special thoughts fo us all. This is excellent!!! ------------------------------------------------ Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate~ So good to see you. Well, hon ... someday you will and then I want to hear YOUR song !  LoneWolf~ Gosh, I sure appreciate your thoughts. I am forever singing and talking my stuff out loud ... not everyone finds it so 'excellent'. LOL ! Thanks, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Obviously your affair was not with Rumplestiltskin! This is excellent writing, Marge. Salutes your way!!! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
LOL at Balladeer!  Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, I can't let it go at that........  Yes, the mention of your name Lights again that dying flame How my heart within me swells Your name sounds and I hear bells I recall those many hours With you in your ivory tower I smile and whisper to your photo "I love you. Take me, Quasimoto!!!" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, I remember what that was like. Smooth flowing rhyme and meter in this little gem Liz |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Is it hot in here????? You are awesome!!!! This brought back some memories...maybe that's why it's warm You know how to capture the moments and bring back the memories. Three thumbs up!!!! (go figure..lol)Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ I don't remember doing Rumplestiltskin ... but sometimes a gal just loses track. SO MANY MEN ... SO LITTLE TIME ! Elizabeth~ Oh, yeah ... Just the mention of his name sends me cowering for shame ! Balladeer-AGAIN ! Oh? That was your HEART swelling ? Coulda' fooled me. Now that 'Quasi' with his lump ... he could really, really (I'll e-mail you) LOL ! Elizabeth, my friend~ COVER YOUR EYES !  Balladeer and I are being naughty. (again) Thank you love for the read. ButterfliesDC~ LOL ! Give Balladeer back his thumb! So glad you enjoyed it. This WAS a romantic render until Balladeer got it cranked up to bombastic laughter degree. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Oh, Marge, it sounds like you've got it bad. This really spoke to me, enjoyed it very much. Joanna |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Oh, Marge, it sounds like you've got it bad. This really spoke to me, enjoyed it very much. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
I CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM VERY MUCH. I DUNNO IF THAT'S GOOD OR BAD...LOL BUT NEWAYZ...GREAT POEM I LOVED IT!! HOPE TO SEE SOME MORE BY YOU IN THE FUTURE!! I LOOK FORWARD TO READING IT!! ~~~LOVE~~~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
When the passions was there it's hard to forget. Marge this was truly a wonderful read and it made my heart flutter bringing back some memories of past loves. I can relate, even the mention of a name can make your heart skip a beat. LoL Tracie  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Ah... that feeling of infatuation... don'tcha love it? Enjoyed this poem, Marge. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Isn't it amazing how just the thought of that special person can send us swooning sometimes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joanna~ Thanks for the read. I'm always in love with love. Brat~ Thank you for the reply. Glad you liked. Tracie~ Yes, gal. Hearts a'flutter .. must be Spring ! Doreen~ Nothing like it for sure. Glad you liked. Hoot~ Don't we just know it ! That's the truth. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful Marge! A name, a single person can do so much to us. Exellent, I loved it! (and LOL at Balladeer's reply and your response!) *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
TSSSS~~~~~~~ Girlfriend, you are smokin' with this one~  Loved it! Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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