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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Butterflies and turtle doves, ...frolic in the sun, As puppy dogs and unicorns, ...through green meadows run, Little boys and little girls, ...playing hide and seek, With elephants and platypus, ...careful! do not peek! Lancelot and Guenevere, ...ride on horse snow white, Seeking out their Camelot, ...beneath moon's golden light, "All Aboard," conductor yells, ...ride on our train with us, We're never late, because time flies, ...atop of Pegasus, Up above a purple kite, ...dances on the wind, As up ahead a leprechaun, ...jigs around the bend, The engine's wheels go clickety-clack, ...upon the licorice track, As we head to land of Dream, ...we're never coming back. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 04-02-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Let me on this train.... I'm in!!![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 04-02-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"This train is bound for Glory, this train..." Sorry, Woody's words just popped into my mind...it was still open wide from reading this lovely poem of yours, Mike. Whimsy, innocence, imagery, light... all the glories of a train taking flight to far away lands, to magical tales, endless delight, sailing over the rails. ...may I come too? ![]() ~ Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderfully uplifting, my friend. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mike , another beautiful tale from the land of make believe, cleverly written liz |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
mike- hope i'm not too late for this train...really liked the imagery of this one. i have always had an interest for the magical and unknown such as leprichauns and unicorns. this poem was like a dream yet very much real. thanks so much for sharing! amy ![]() ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Mike, this is a wonderful delightful fantasy piece! What imagination you have!! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank ya all kindly. Nothing wrong with a little make believe every once in a while... we might all be a little better off if we visited our dreams more often.... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ What absolute delight. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wait up....I'm coming too ![]() |
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