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My Thought`s on Passion ( is this better?)
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My Thought`s on Passion ( is this better?) |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
So many different post and many are quite the same, Still a friendly place where every body knows your name, Some will make you laugh until you hurt inside, Other`s will tell everything with nothing left to hide, No matter how your feeling Good,happy or bad, Your friend`s here in Passion Will never leave you Sad.  Sorry everyone,I know that this doesn`t really do those here in Passion justice but It`s all I could come up with for now... < !signature--> Today is the first day of the rest of my life. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-12-2000).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wizard - another nice poem - you are right, passions is definitely the place to be! I hope you are still smiling ..... Roniece .... |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Yes Mam, From ear to ear..lol Thank you for your kind reply Roniece  Today is the first day of the rest of my life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Looking forward to reading more of your work Wizard ! ....... Roniece ...... mmm, can you please tell me how to get the smiley face happening? I can't work it out for the life of me!!! LOL |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Where everybody knows your name...reminds me of Cheers...maybe the day will come where we can all sit down and share a cold one!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Devina, that was my thought as well when I wrote that part...that`s a great show  Roniece,when you post a reply,scroll down a little and you`ll see, "Available Smilies" well the little things on the left of the smiles are what you want to put on your post and it will come out as the smile beside it.. I hope this help`s you?< !signature--> Today is the first day of the rest of my life. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-12-2000).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
AH!!!!!!! now I know!!   ) THANK YOU! .... Roniece .... xx |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Kicking feet back and forth aaawww shuck`s  dem xx`s really got me LoL....your welcome Miss Mam < !signature-->Today is the first day of the rest of my life. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-12-2000).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Now I'm the one who's smiling here Wizzard ! Roniece |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Roniece, any time that I can give someone a smile,I can smile myself. Your a sweety. Thank you for being so kind. < !signature-->Today is the first day of the rest of my life. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-12-2000).] |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Some of us like passions a little to much I think we should start PA-Passions Anonymous Seriously though, cool poem, and I agree that last line could use a little work. If you are having trouble finding a rhyming word, check out this page: http://www.link.cs.cmu.edu/cgi-bin/dougb/rhyme.cgi I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Maybe "that you came are really glad" ? awkward I know..... or "a smile to your face will add"? or "will never make you mad"? SIGH...harder than it ought to be! But hey, I liked the poem! |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Mistik,Beki, Thank you for your help and replies. I have edited this and I hope it does a little more justice to those here in Passion? I know it could still use a little more work but sometime`s my mind draw`s a blank  Today is the first day of the rest of my life. |
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Tasi Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 38Canada |
Truly a fun place to be and wonderful to share your work with others who can appreciate it I believe you said it all Wizzard !!Tasi  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
There's always justice in truth, Wizzard and there is much truth in this verse. As a member of Passions I thank you. Your contributions in poetry as well as support and friendship are what Passions is all about. michael |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wizzard you did well, an excellent tribute we all thanks you Tracie |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Taci and Tracie I want to thank you both for your input,replies and support. It`s the replies that makes Passion so special. Thank you both Michael, Buddy I feel for you,Damn do I feel for you. I sure as heck hope all work`s out with you two....no matter what happens,DONT GIVE UP ON YOUR FRIENDS HERE AT PASSION...OK? KEEP YOUR HEAD UP BUD. Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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