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Rod17NYS
Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-04-01 03:09 PM


The pain I feel is endless,
my heart aches, my soul is dying,
I've lied, I've hurt everyone around me, even my own mother.

And all for a forbidden love,
for a forbidden life,
I wish things could be different,
and again I hear you crying,

but even though I know its all wrong, I'm still striving,
I dont know where I’m gonna end up,
but I just hope one day You'll forgive me, and understand, that I won’t stop
Until the end...


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Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-04-02 10:20 AM


Hi Rod,

I am going through this very thing with my son, And time I think is the factor here. Your choices are yours and nobody elses and in time they will understand.

Thank you,  Cerenity

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-04-03 10:52 PM


I've been there. No one wanted me with the guy I was with. Just so happens 16 years later we're still together with 3 kids.
It's hard when others don't agree, but it's something, sometimes ya just gotta do. I understand that. Good luck!

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-04-03 11:16 PM



Rod,
This has certainly brought back some strong memories, you have written wonderfully and captured the feelings well.


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


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