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~ On Frozen Pond ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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On Frozen Pond ~~~ I climbed upon the greenhouse roof a drunken shortcut took The glass beneath me shattered proof of every step I took ~ I cut my knees and scraped my shins my pants a ragged mess A few more steps and I'll be across this frozen pond I guess ~ A mighty crash without a splash The ice gave way too soon My belt hung up upon a nail as I dangled above the room ~ I wave my arms and kick my legs hey there's people under water And I'm not even soaking wet except I relieved my bladder ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Unusual subject matter!! But a very cool poem for sure!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFLMAO Thanks for the laugh today Rex...love it!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Remind me to where a raincoat and hat when I enter your greenhouse from now on! LOL |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
ROFLMAO as usual when I read somthing you write...Oh to see the world threw your eyes...it would be much more interesting. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL  This is delightful, Rex! Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rex Allen, Rex Allen, whatever am I going to so with you! Rest assured it won't be gardening! ROFLMAO! Okay, Okay, so I won't be rolling on the floor, either! EEewww! Thank for the laughs, me buddy! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Rex....I will never look at a greenhouse the same way again!!!! This was great....thank you for the laugh!!! I needed that!!! LOL. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Lizzie ... to be sure ... parental guidance is advised  hoot_owl ... a laugh a day keeps you lips from cracking Poet deVine ... Hey ... April showers Cheryl ... looking through my eyes ... you would only see little bloodshot lines Denise ... you are a treasure for sure serenity ... sure you can ... I missed a spot Lone Wolf ... you snuck in there on me ... thanks for reading and hey ... don't forget to look up [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Oh my! I was reading this aloud...that last line is a doozie, dear Rex! I thank you for the laugh! (Only you...) ~ Claire |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
ROFLMAO!!!! This is just too good! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Claire ... good thing I don't drink or take drugs ... it could ruin a good poem and smear my reputation WhtDove ... I try |
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