»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #6
»
fresh grist from the mill
| Open Poetry #6 |
|
fresh grist from the mill |
|
|
Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
|
Invitation My darling, oh my love have I shared with this day? Have I yet held and whispered hugged the world go away? It’s true, I love every in countless, small ways. In the chores that you do even the dingy that you say. Loving through troubles each day, with it’s true. Warmed by sweet memories of youth spent with you. Memories of beginnings a few decades ago. Our love freshly planted with promise to grow. Our coals are now cooling oh yet, smolder they do... a twinkle mixed with touch old flame bursts anew! My darling, oh my love still; nay always, my best friend. Shall we adjourn to our chamber loose the kisses to begin? Daniel J Burt 3/00 EndoftheRoad (all rights reserved) there is only one... Romans 10:9-10 |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
ooooo...very nice! I really like this. Very romantic. Glad to see you are friends again! Miss you bro and love you.... Sis Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
||
|
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Bleeding, Good morning, This is lovely, you sound like your in love, isn't it wonderful. Thank you, Cerenity |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"My darling, oh my love still; nay always, my best friend. Shall we adjourn to our chamber loose the kisses to begin?" Oh....I love it  |
||
|
Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thank you all for the input. lol i rate my work on my darling's tear factor. This one the tears were flying before the first stanza was read and the last (thanks for the confirmation, Hoot!) provoked the desired result, hmmm somehow i see more emotional triggers built into my fiction... b there is only one... Romans 10:9-10 |
||
|
Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
Another testimony of how God works in very mysterious ways. Husband of mine you wrote this long before I was part of your life and while ex Mrs. Burt of the recent past and your self thought this was for her there are so many clues here that your soul mate had not appeared anywhere but your dreams and unconsciece thoughts yet. So when I read this and saw a youth spent together and countless other clues in this I really had a moment of sadness for your recent ex wife and also a moment of pure gratefulness to her because she truly does not know what she gave up and what she is going to miss out on with you. Happiness and love are so much more than the good times in the sack and making love is so much more than sex I really really feel sorry for her because she will probably never get the opportunity to know what true love and happiness is again. Too bad hind sight is 20-20 and THANK YOU GOD that she was so blind. In love with you more now than ever and looking forward to the deep lasting love of growing old together. Meet you on the porch to rock the night away |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is so touching... dabbing at my eyes now. Best of luck and much love to you both. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
