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A few old poems
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A few old poems |
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pmc Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 48Germany |
Diana I had no time to wonder why, No farewell kiss or last goodbye, So hush my darlings do not cry For now at last in peace I lie, Our times together were so few, Those happy days I spent with you, I tried my best I hope you see, So now my sons please pray for me, To all the causes that I loved, To those I met, To those I hugged, To the poor, the sick, the dying, I'll be there when you are crying. The work we started must continue, Please carry on I am still with you, When times are hard please say a prayer Think of me I am still there, I was no saint, nor sinner too, I always was just one of you, And life must carry on the same, Until in Gods grace we meet again. Farewell. Yvonne Your twenty one and like the rest, Have taken wing and flown the nest, May this year for you fulfilment bring, In life, in love, in everything, And when the year draws to a close, May your life blossom like a rose, Then let us hear and look upon, A happy smiling sweet Yvonne. Peggy When Christmas came around this year, New stars and angels did appear, The stars lit up the sky so bright, I met an Angel in the night, She came to me all on her own, And had no one to walk her home, With hair of gold and eyes of blue, That Christmas Angel it was you. pmc |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Wow, PMC! Very nice poems, with great flow throughout...I especially like the first one. Great job! Troy  Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi PMC, Welcome to passions I like these old poems very much, you show your passion well, look forward to more old poems. Thank you, Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely heartfelt poems! Very nice! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PMC~ Lovely, all. 'Think of me I am still there' Thank you, I needed this line today. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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pmc Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 48Germany |
Troy, Cerenity, Denise, hoot_owl_rn, and Marge, Thank you for your encouragement. "Diana" I wrote not because I was a big Diana fan, I think she tried her best under difficult circumstances and would be the first to admit that she was no saint. The last two poems were only ever read by the people they were written for and I thought I would air them once before confining them to history. P.J.McFadden |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Lovely poems...wonderful writing..I think you captured Diana perfectly and accurately..Look forward to more. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a treat! I loved all of these, but the first one was my favorite. Thank you for sharing them. May I print a copy? Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Old poems - New poems... Keep 'em coming - You've got talent...  |
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pmc Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 48Germany |
Elizabeth You don't have to ask. By all means print a copy CherylLynnMckee, Nan and everyone else Thank you once more for your kind comments. I was honestly surprised to receive so many replies. There must be lots more of you with poetry from times past Why not post it? P.J. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Confining to history...? Why ever would you want to do that? There is some great work here - I really loved the last one. |
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