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Slashed soul
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 86
England

0 posted 2000-03-31 07:58 AM


Across the waters from this land,
to a girl called kelly - I give my hand,

I'll pick her up when she is down,
I'll be there when no-one's around.
The friendship I give to you, as absolute and true.

I'm your knight in armour,
I'll make it safe to cry.
wipe the tears from your cheeks
never say goodbye.

In the night, the pouring rain,
I'll hold you tight, I'll kill your pain.

Look into me, and see....I am
your destiny.

-Rich-


© Copyright 2000 RJEHKing - All Rights Reserved
Enola
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 138
England
1 posted 2000-03-31 08:16 AM


Amazing and swoonsome!  She's one lucky girl Rich.  

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-04-01 12:12 PM


Hi Slashed Soul,

Verey luckey girl, this is so sweet.

Thank you for the read.

Cerenity

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-04-01 12:16 PM



SS*
This is so touching, You have put such love into this and this particular part warmed me through and through....

I'm your knight in armour,
I'll make it safe to cry.
wipe the tears from your cheeks
never say goodbye.

Thank you for sharing it...your  gift is amazing.

Slashed soul
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86
England
4 posted 2000-04-01 04:39 AM


Thank you all, Words mean nothing, until someone hears them.....as someone said!

)

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-04-01 10:35 AM


I hope you shared this one with her  
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