Open Poetry #6 |
Cursed (*for SEA*) |
tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Have you walked where you've never been and it felt more then just familiar... I've walked this way on hallowed ground In riches and rags I've been around As male and female I've played the part I've won the dance and lost the heart I've looked in to the eyes of love, As I've watched the roses wither With chill of spin I know not how The one true rose will bloom As it has before this time, In a crescent harvest moon Each time, loving more and more As I am as infinity, love never ends, over and over it begins My last life lost in battles defeat It brought me back in wounded pleat I ware the scares of gallant pride On victorious dreams I ride In this life I know that I shall heal To rejoin the world as it is sealed Am I a worrier? No say not I fought for riches I never got 'Tis peace in heart, I've not found In hollowed hills, on battle grounds Many souls have passed my way And onto the heavens, where they shall stay As I only dream of such a day As I turn each corner, I know I've been And ten thousand more, that I shall spend I'll see the eyes again and again As I watch the roses wither For eyes that close are not far gone they are not at rest, they have just moved on To a place like here, with just new names faces and places are all the same Though some don't know just where or when If they have seen, and are back again Inside of them they know not Splendor of sorrow is what they got They are the players in the poets verse They too, bare the weight of this curse Their eye's have seen an unending past From heart to tounge their tales are cast Time will pass as peace they seek As again in life they meet © tori 1999 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tori, I love it!!!!! FANTASTIC! Wow, this is so good! Thank you for putting this up for me to read! -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tori, Very well written, enjoyed reading the poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice read Tori |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Sea ... I'm glad you liked it.. You too Sey and Hoot... thanks for reading.. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori, I don't know what's been inspiring you lately, but whatever it is, I hope it hangs around! You've made me laugh, cry, and just well brought out emotions. BRAVO lady! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Tori, this is WONDERFUL!! WoW, I am at a loss for words! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
well to honest Dove this is an older one. But I'm glad you liked it. Thanks Echo gald you stoped by to read.. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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