Open Poetry #6 |
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Chase The Stars |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California ![]() |
Chase The Stars My eyes did see you as a babe, but a young man you are. Across the many sunsets you have come gaining strength and wisdom for all to see. Your challenges have been many, you concord them all. You placed gleam upon my eyes, and laughter among my breaths. I wish a star for you to ride and gale winds upon your back, for I know you will go far, and many trails you will blaze. I have not the strength to follow you well, but upon my mind you will always dwell. You can come back to me with all of your tales to tell. Keep your sights among the stars for they shine brightest and will take you far. My love will be with you both day and night and forever more my only son. By, Cerenity |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Cerenity-1, this is soo beautiful, touched my heart. ![]() What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is lovely and needs boosted back up here ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Cerenity! Denise |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Awwwwwwwwwwww! What a tender mom's heart talking. Really enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi every one, Thank you so much for your loving replys, Yes the heart is feeling some emotion right know. My son just moved out of the house and got a job. All of a sudden im feeling a loss even though I know this is the natural way of things, and of course all of this stuff like what happend in his life comes back at times like this. He's a good boy though and I am proud of him. Cerenity |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very nice Cerenity. Marina |
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