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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-03-29 07:01 PM


Laughing On The Floor Dying

My friend doreen peri had me laughing on the floor dying
never could I imagine laughter so intense I'd be crying
a funny poem she wrote weaving me in laughter dying
which in return will keep these men in her mailbox flying

Yesterday miss peri planted on me a never ending smile
I've known this lady as a loyal friend a very long while
today like an old telephone her ability to create I dial
as she exhibited hilariousness in her very amazing style

I still can't venture into it seriously as I've so been trying
everytime silly laughter's rolling me on the floor dying
now forever and a day I shall in happiness be sighing
as I continue searching in gleefulness never any denying

With ten pictured men a day soon a bedroom wall to tile
or in a little corner a mountain of possibilities to file
she thinks I'm crazy sending her these men in a pile
yet one day in futures eye she'll decide to go the extra mile

© Copyright 2000 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-29 07:04 PM


This is delightful, Gloria!  

Denise

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-03-29 07:24 PM


So YOU were the culprit!!! Very cute..  
doreen peri
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3 posted 2000-03-29 10:18 PM


G-4 ME?

Today I met Mister Perfect.
He was my delight, it's true!
He came to my front door, you see,
a Dream for all I do!

He plays my favorite music-
keeps me company in a dark room!
He takes me on trips
to the places he picks...
and makes my ideas bloom!

He is FAST talkin', world walkin'
silver-grey stud
with a gorgeous, sleek body and style!
He's a writer, an artist, a chef, movie buff--
A photographer, tres versatile!

Now Eden's sweet apple's been bitten 'longside
of my new love- I'll never turn back!
He will be my companion for several years hence...

Oh DAMN! I LOVE MY brand new MAC!!




-hehehe.... cute poem, gloria...thanks for the new men in my mailbox... I especially thought the one that looked like he was a mass murderer on qualudes was interesting... LOL... seriously, m'friend.... I DO appreciate your concern for my new single life and y'neva know, y'know!? For now, I'm enjoying Mac... one day I might want another New Toy, tho... hehe

WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-03-29 10:53 PM


You spread the laugher Gloria! Thanks for lettin us in on it  
Balladeer
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5 posted 2000-03-29 11:07 PM


Hey!!! What's not to enjoy about a MAC !!!!



doreen peri
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6 posted 2000-03-30 07:45 AM


hahahahahahaha



Michael, Michael, Michael... what am I going to do with you? LOL

I'm writing double entendres! LOL... who woulda thought?


Nan
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7 posted 2000-03-30 08:12 AM


Doreen's got a new MAC??
I sure hope it's a BIG'n!!!






[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-30-2000).]

hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 2000-03-30 09:30 AM


ROFL....who needs cupid when passions has you   Still reviewing all the men that suddenly appeared in my mail  
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