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Dawn |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
As hush of dawn rests like benediction, Flushed sky brightens, in rainbowed eruption, Springs forth new day, springs forth sparkling fountain Of faeries rising mist, beneath high mountain, Cascading over man and beast; imbues, God's palette, pastelled rose and crimson hues, Each hill and verdant valley soon submissed, Before dawn's spreading light, as by Helios kissed, Crest to crest, retreating forces of the night, Bow before dawn's majesty, coming of the light. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Lovely picture you paint for us..divine indeed! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem,Mike!!!!!   |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful dawn, Mike! Wonderful! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your imagery is exceptional! Each poem you write is better than the one before it... I applaud your talent! Keep them coming!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"Crest to crest retreating forces of the night". How beautiful. We always think of the daylight coming, but I never thought of night retreating.This is splendid! Very fine poetry liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Gorgeous view from here Mike, thanks for painting it. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
What imagery! This is indeed very lovely. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
This is a beautifull portrayel of nature, coming of the light.... that is what I feel with this poem. Excellent. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ As I sit watching the 'night retreating' I am awed by the beauty of your poem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A lovely picture you have painted here |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you all so much. Is a beautiful day here... sun shining... birds chirping... unfortunately, had to go to work... but what the hey... I can go home after work and mow the lawn... *smile* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like it, Mike - I like it lots... LOL... We could play "Dawn Sonnet" tag.. ya think? It wouldn't take much to make a sonnet of this...  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Feel free my friend, sonnet away. Had started it as a sonnet, but decided I had sonneted enough lately. *smile* |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
There is a treasure in your poetry, and I am so glad you're sharing. I still don't know how you do it... ~ Claire |
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