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Your Heart
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Your Heart |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Before me I see a man His heart is bigger than all the land It radiates warmth and love Gentle like the wings of a dove His voice is sweet and soft To heaven it's song will be loft It found a way into my heart And from there never will it part His heart is one with mine With true love that is the sign To him I give mind, body, and soul All that I am to make him whole For my heart holds the missing piece That will give his pain sweet release His smile lights up this room And frees me from impending doom His love is all that I ask I need it to complete the task That is now at hand See the writing in the sand This is my hopeful vision Making it reality is my mission My heart will not stop Until from it the last blood does drop Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
That was so lovely! It really touched my heart. My favorite part is: My heart will not stop Until from it the last blood does drop Lovely ending. That is the way I try to be also!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
..full of feelings, chasing that shadow of love as I am too.... |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
I love reading your poetry...you can feel that it just flows from your heart and soul..lovely. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I hope you gave this to that man! Very nice.  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Terry...thank you for the nice comments. I will not stop. Have to keep trying at least. Glad to hear you are that way also.  Slashed soul...thanks. Yes, they are my feelings and the chase is on!!! Cheryl...thank you and yes it does. Sometimes it amazes me how well it transfers onto paper. PDV...yes, I did and he thought it was very nice also. Thank you!!! ------------------------------------------------ Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LW This is magnificent!!!! You write from deep within and it shows with every word how pure you are "deep within". Loved it!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ A beautiful loving poem. Enjoyed it so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey LW. . . I have to go with Marge here on this one. . . you have indeed written from the heart. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Butterflies....thank you so much for the kind words!!! Yes, I do write from within be it pain or love or whatever. My feelings have always ran deep within. Glad you liked it!! Marge....thank you for the sweet comment and happy that you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it a lot!! Sven....thank you and my heart was hanging from my sleeve on this one. I am very happy to hear that you liked it. -------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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