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Slashed soul
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since 2000-03-29
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England

0 posted 2000-03-29 11:56 AM


In the silence of my sleep,
I fall in love - I fall in deep.
This woman of my dreams -is everthing-it seems.
I touched her skin, forbidden land - as I am,a married man.
Touching, kissing, in I go -heart on sleeve no guilt on show.

Passion explodes, mind overload.
This woman drives me insane...
We make love all night, and tomorrow we do it again.

I smashed the glass block of trust,
I smashed it with my lust..
Christ it was good!

Soul ripped apart,broken heart, my lover has gone.
Guilt creeps in, the ultimate sin, time for a fresh start.


nothing lasts forever......


© Copyright 2000 RJEHKing - All Rights Reserved
Collins
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since 2000-03-28
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1 posted 2000-03-29 12:01 PM


I think we both write in a very simular manner. This is a very deep poem. It is beautiful.
CherylLynnMckee
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 215

2 posted 2000-03-29 12:10 PM


Uh wow...is it hot in here or is it just me..lol..great poem..nicely done.

 

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
3 posted 2000-03-29 12:11 PM


Lessons, it's all about lessons.

Corinne

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-03-29 03:18 PM


Very nice poem.  Rough subject though and tough position you are in.  Good luck.

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TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
5 posted 2000-03-29 03:29 PM


Very expressive work on such a touching subject!   Welcome to passions!



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-03-29 07:03 PM


Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. There is a great deal of emotion in this poem...  
serenity blaze
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7 posted 2000-03-29 07:15 PM


Ouch.  And oh how I do sympathize...Welcome!
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