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..the affair....
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..the affair.... |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
In the silence of my sleep, I fall in love - I fall in deep. This woman of my dreams -is everthing-it seems. I touched her skin, forbidden land - as I am,a married man. Touching, kissing, in I go -heart on sleeve no guilt on show. Passion explodes, mind overload. This woman drives me insane... We make love all night, and tomorrow we do it again. I smashed the glass block of trust, I smashed it with my lust.. Christ it was good! Soul ripped apart,broken heart, my lover has gone. Guilt creeps in, the ultimate sin, time for a fresh start. nothing lasts forever...... |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
I think we both write in a very simular manner. This is a very deep poem. It is beautiful. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Uh wow...is it hot in here or is it just me..lol..great poem..nicely done. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lessons, it's all about lessons. Corinne |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very nice poem. Rough subject though and tough position you are in. Good luck. ----------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Very expressive work on such a touching subject! Welcome to passions! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. There is a great deal of emotion in this poem...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ouch. And oh how I do sympathize...Welcome! |
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