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Sandra Cox
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since 2000-03-24
Posts 48
Essex, London,UK

0 posted 2000-03-28 06:27 PM



We Dream a Dream.........

We dream a dream together you and I
From here on in may our love never die
Our minds become like one with the earth
Our bodies connect for all they are worth
Between us ne're will there be any pain
For we will be true and in trust we remain
Forever a constant we deem to be true
No longer a singular me and then you
A couple completed for all the world to see
In our own little world just you and me
These days no longer will be dull and bare
For now you will know I will always be there
To weep when you weep and to ease your fears
To smile when you smile and to wipe your tears
To plan and to hope that our love will remain
We have nothing to lose but so much to gain
The future is strange no one can be sure
What you and I were put here for
But one thing I know and of this I am clear
That fate has decided that this is our year
We were part of a plan all mapped out in time
From the beginning of life you were meant to be mine
It took a few years but still it had to be
We had to experience, life we had to see
And though we didn't know it when we felt the blow
The pain was a path we had to get to know
For we now emerge both stronger and wise
We've felt all the hurt and heard all the lies
And this is where we can start love anew
The next chapter of our life just me and you!!

Sandra x

This poem was written for someone special, lets hope one day these words may come true!

With Love xx

© Copyright 2000 sandra cox - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-28 06:46 PM


Sandra, this is a real nice poem. Very good rhyme throughout.  It's a nice dream you dream, mapped out in time.
Nice writing.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
2 posted 2000-03-28 07:46 PM


Love is beautiful any way you write it but you wrote with exceptional beauty and thought.  
Sven
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3 posted 2000-03-28 10:03 PM


Sandra,
       this is beautiful. . .what else can I say?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-03-29 01:04 AM


this is excellent, very well written, and expressed. your emotions are strong and evident in this piece. great rhyme flow too...very nice work.good luck on your dreams
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman


CherylLynnMckee
Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215

5 posted 2000-03-29 01:11 AM


So lovely..and it flows beautifully..makes you want to believe theres somone out there meant for just you.

 

Sandra Cox
Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48
Essex, London,UK
6 posted 2000-03-30 05:51 PM


Thank you all so much for your nice words.  I actually sent this to the person I orginally wrote it for.  He thought your comments were wonderful and thanked me for being his friend, I'll keep you posted!!!

Sandra x

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
7 posted 2000-03-31 12:38 PM


Hold onto your dream! Good poem..keep us informed!  
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