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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Bubbling clouds of pearls.. Painted by natures brush.. A canvas of irredescent blue.. Mutlicolored hues.. A spectator from the ground.. Ethereal heaven found.. An unearthly paradise..of flaxen and azzure.. Celestial for sure.. First blush of morningtide..upon the effervescent sky.. With all its beauty wide.. Singing like a melody.. a tabernacle choir.. Secret lyrics.. the birds of dawn can hear... Enchanted.. voicing their replys.. The face of earth.. With traces of simplicity.. I lay entranced within.. Untouchable creation.. So elegantly adorned.. Feeling tender for a day anew.. Budding infancy.. With every newborn sky.. Another day presents.. Endless second tries. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a beautiful picture painted in this poem. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Billy Bolden Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 23 |
This is very nice use of rythem and color. Like a painter selecting from his/her pallet. Perhaps we can see more. bb |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent...exquisite imagery... very well written... take care, jm  Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Wonderful! You painted the blue sky right into my heart - made my day. Thanks! Nature Lovers Unite! Troy  Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Most exquisite piece of poetry. I thought this just wonderful and with excellent visionary LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
I feel so honoured that you liked my poems, especially from a poet who writes such beautiful poems such as this one. It shines!!! |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Thank-you to everyone..its most appreciated..There's so many talented people in here...it means alot to me that you enjoyed my poem and all your kind words to...Thanks again. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I loved this poem ... I think I might write a poem to welcome spring and nature and fresh air too ... only mine might suck ... but what the heck  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
lol Rex...I know your poem would'nt suck in the least...I would look forward to reading it..and thanks for the nice words on mine. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cheryl, You are very talented and I enjoy your work very much. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Cheryl....beautiful words. I see the blank page is your canvas....wow what a work of art you create!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Absolutely lovely, Cheryl! I love reading your work, because you generate the sweetest atmospheres! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice imagery |
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