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Passionate Kisses |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Passionate Kisses The world is spinning fast it seems There’s barely time to smile But kindly take a moment For a kiss once in a while I feel my brain’s on overload This stress will wear and tear But I’ll survive with lovely Passionate kisses here and there You work too much, you come home late A rat race without end But I don’t mind if you’ll afford Passionate kisses now and then There’s nothing like a passionate kiss It somehow clears the air It breakes the ice, it soothes the soul And leads from here to there It’s so much better there than here On this we both agree Let’s fly there with one passionate kiss And set our spirits free Let’s take a lover’s holiday To a place of endless bliss The trip is free, the only fare Is just one passionate kiss Elizabeth Santos |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely Elizabeth! A good reminder to us all! Corinne |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
You have revealed that a passionate kiss is the key to endless bliss. Didn't know a kiss could be so powerful. Women of the world beware. (smiling) Elizabeth, this is a nice poem. Another beautiful poem from a true poet. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Well I've sent my kiss And paid my fare. I'll take a free holiday, To anywhere. Beautiful poem, Love Ya Sy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lips can say everything we need to hear without saying a word... *G* This is wonderful, Elizabeth!!! *S* |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh , I love this Liz ... yes, a passionate kiss from my beloved seems to make the world go away .... Beautiful |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Elizabeth! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent advice! Good poem...  |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Beautiful poem... EVERYONE loves a passionate kiss! Hehehe  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Double-post! < !signature-->"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 03-28-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Corinne, Just need to stop and smell the roses. Thanks Danny, A kiss can be very powerful. Thank you Sy, Sorry, Fare not accepted. You cannot send a passionate kiss. Nice try. Thanks Suthern, You know how to communicate. Thanks Pepper, That's what I mean. A nice vacation spot. Thank you Denise, Which do you mean, the kiss or the poem? Thanks, dear PDV, Glad you like passionate kisses Lovebug, What was that hehehe at the end. Something we should know? hehe Liz |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I agree Elizabeth. I like the idea of the only fare for a wonderful trip being a kiss..it's something everyone can afford...and it sounds like a good idea to me! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Elizabeth, It is so true that we often forget that we spend way too much time working and running to and fro, when the best things in life cannot be bought, regardless of how much we work or how much we make. Lovely poem! Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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