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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 2000-03-26 06:07 PM

Oasis

From spring fed feelings
In a desert life
Flow truths
In words from waters
Free to all that thirst
For understanding
The mind
From which such water flows.

Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-03-26 07:14 PM

I will take a sip of that please.... good one..

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

2 posted 2000-03-26 07:59 PM

only a sip then pass the cup!

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-03-26 08:01 PM

I can't get enough of that!

Denise

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

4 posted 2000-03-26 08:06 PM

Oh Denise!!!!!! You always want soooo much!!!! hehehehehe....

Denise

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5 posted 2000-03-26 08:07 PM

I can't get enough of that!

Denise

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-03-26 09:47 PM

RobertB, this is GORGEOUS! Thank you m'friend!

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

7 posted 2000-03-27 07:21 AM

thank you serenity...you are most welcome.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2000-03-27 07:59 AM

..a small sip to whet the thirst.. Very nice..

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

9 posted 2000-03-27 08:18 AM

Lovely verse, Robert. Poetic expression is your forte. I like your title choice, too.

~ Claire

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 2000-03-27 11:04 AM

With just a cupfull, you filled rivers of the mind

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

11 posted 2000-03-27 10:24 PM

Thanks Claire and Ruth.....rivers of the mind......hmmm what images that conjours up.

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2000-03-27 10:41 PM

Made me think of the lyrics of a song, "I could drink a cup of you". I like the way you say so much in just a few perfect words.

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

13 posted 2000-03-28 08:14 AM

Thanks Martie...don't know that song...but now I want to hear it!

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