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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I'm nobody really I'm just a man A man with the heart of a poet Gentle and loving A man with the voice of an angel Open and accepting My life has always been an open door When I thought I had given all, I gave more This is my calling, to pierce the darkness with light To be a help to others, giving them strength to fight I've always been this way A gentle spirit A man who wears his heart on his sleeve Caring and helping A man who has borne much on his shoulders Supporting and encouraging My life has always been an open book And, just for a moment, I'd thought I'd let you take a look To look and see where begin the words that come from my pen A better look into the heart and mind of one they call "Sven"! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ NOBODY ? NOBODY ? I don't think so ! You are 'thumbody' and your gentle loving spirit comes through each poem you grace us with. We've seen your heart. It beats with loving poetry for friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Sven..I kindof suspected all those things about you..James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was good Sven...you're sure to have the girls swooning with this one!!! lol Seriously though...you're truly the poet!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Great Poem. It reminds me that there still are some truly good people out there. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Never say "JUST", my friend..  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Do not sell yourself short my friend. You are definitely not a nobody. You are a very special man and I am sure that shines through in all you do. This is a wonderful glimpse into your heart....thank you for letting me look.  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Anyone who works at helping others for nothing in return is not only a somebody, but much more in my eyes. Great work, on the poem and in life |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Who??...a poet, a prophet, a dreamer, a friend, a romantic heart, a soulmate, ... TELL ME WHEN YOU WANT ME TO STOP...LOL EXCELLENT POEM SVEN!! very nice, take care,jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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